專(zhuān)四應(yīng)試技巧（寫(xiě)作篇2：句子的連貫性）

　　專(zhuān)四應(yīng)試技巧(寫(xiě)作篇2：句子的連貫性)

　　句子的連貫性：指句子連接貫通，銜接自然。句子不論長(zhǎng)短都應(yīng)環(huán)環(huán)緊扣，符合語(yǔ)法、邏輯。請(qǐng)注意以下要點(diǎn)：

　　1)平行結(jié)構(gòu)：把兩個(gè)獲兩個(gè)以上意思相近或相對(duì)的、地位相當(dāng)?shù)某煞忠淹馀c發(fā)行是泛指在一起。其中以下三條規(guī)則須加以注意。

　　a)使用相同的語(yǔ)法來(lái)表達(dá)具有相同功能的句子成分，可運(yùn)用并列連詞and, but或or等。

　　× If you want to learn a foreign language well, you’d better try to think in it and speak it as much as possible.

　　√ If you want to learn a foreign language well, you’d better try to think in it and to speak it as much as possible.

　　b)正確使用相關(guān)連詞，如both…and, not … but, not only … but also等。

　　× Wang Lan is not only clever but also she is helpful.

　　√ Wang Lan is not only clever but also helpful.

　　c)一個(gè)句子或段落中的人稱(chēng)、時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)要始終保持一致。

　　× One reason I like to go to school on foot is the physical exercise I get from it.

　　√ I like to go to school on foot I regard it as a kind of physical exercise.

　　2)代詞一致：句中代詞應(yīng)在數(shù)、性、人稱(chēng)等方面保持一致，或者與它所照應(yīng)的名詞詞組在這些方面保持一致。如：

　　We each are responsible for our own jobs.

　　We are each responsible for his own jobs.

　　3)代詞與先行詞一致：寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)弄清楚代詞究竟指代哪個(gè)名詞，否則意思不明確，造成模棱兩可的感覺(jué)。如：

　　× The old woman told the little girl that she was wrong.

　　√ The old woman told the little girl,”I am wrong.”

　　√ The old woman told the little girl,”You are wrong.”

　　練習(xí)：

　　下列句子中都存在不連貫的問(wèn)題，請(qǐng)修改并指出屬于哪類(lèi)情況。

　　1)He asked the policeman what had happened to him.

　　2)Not only he did make a promise, but he kept.

　　3)All are ready, isn’t it?

　　4)Listening to the wind and smell the fragrant of the lily, you will found that the summer is coming.

　　5)The most important reason I accept his advice is his knowledge of marketing I know from his words.

　　參考答案

　　1)He asked the policeman，“What happened to you?”

　　/ He asked the policeman，“What happened to me?”

　　代詞與先行詞不一致

　　2)Not only did he make a promise, but he kept.

　　連詞使用不當(dāng)(not only前置一定要用倒裝句)

　　3)All are ready, aren't they?

　　代詞不一致

　　4)Listening to the wind and smelling the fragrant of the lily, you will found that the summer is coming.結(jié)構(gòu)不平行

　　5)I accept his advice because I know he is keen in marketing.

　　語(yǔ)態(tài)不一致