雅思寫作萬(wàn)年5.5分怎么提高?避免十大常見錯(cuò)誤
寫作6分首先要求不能跑題。一旦跑題，可能5分都非常難，4.5分是經(jīng)常見到的分?jǐn)?shù)。其次，保證論點(diǎn)的論證能滿足基本的邏輯，論證要充分。最后，不能出現(xiàn)太多的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，確保句子的準(zhǔn)確性。下邊，給大家列一列考生作文中的常見語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤及犯錯(cuò)的原因。
1.The quantity of women workers keep stable from 1985 to 1990.
這個(gè)句子是小作文數(shù)據(jù)圖中學(xué)生所寫。此句明顯有兩個(gè)錯(cuò)誤，一個(gè)是時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。小作文中如果數(shù)據(jù)是過去的，要采用一般過去時(shí)，所以此處要用kept.。第二個(gè)是動(dòng)詞keep形式不對(duì)，這句話的主語(yǔ)是quantity。時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤和主謂不一致是雅思考試寫作和口語(yǔ)最常見的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。
2.With developing of economy,the environment had deteriorated.
這里用了一個(gè)with 介詞+名詞短語(yǔ)，想表達(dá)伴隨的概念。但是大家要牢記介詞后邊可以加名詞、名詞短語(yǔ)、動(dòng)名詞，構(gòu)成介詞短語(yǔ)以便做狀語(yǔ)或者定語(yǔ)。但是developing of economy詞性有問題。A of B是常見的表示所屬的名詞短語(yǔ)格式，翻譯成B的A, 這里要求A和B必須都是名詞。而developing 是形容詞性質(zhì)，所以應(yīng)該改為with the development of economy.。同樣，我們還可以把with替換成as,但是值得注意的是as 是連詞，連詞后邊要加句子，所以可以寫成as the economy develops。
3. Playing computer games waste parents’ hard-earned money.
這句話是經(jīng)典的主謂不一致的錯(cuò)誤。主句是playing computer games 動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)，所以謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞要用單數(shù)加s。在寫一個(gè)現(xiàn)在時(shí)的句子時(shí)，一定要注意主謂一致問題。主語(yǔ)是否是可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)、不可數(shù)名詞、動(dòng)名詞、不定式或是句子。如果是，并且句子中又沒有使用情態(tài)動(dòng)詞，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞要加s。
4. There are many people believe studying abroad is a good choice.
這句話之所以這樣寫，都是受漢語(yǔ)語(yǔ)意的影響。那“有”在英文中我們用there be/have 都是動(dòng)詞概念，所以造成句子多謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，這里的are/believe/ is都是動(dòng)詞，但是句子believe 后邊是個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，明顯動(dòng)詞多了。
5.Government should take immediate measures to protect our environment.
可數(shù)名詞不能單獨(dú)使用。這里government 是可數(shù)名詞，所以在句子中要么用governments, 要么特指the government。
6.University students receive training on job-related skills is necessary.
又是一句讀起來朗朗上口，受漢語(yǔ)語(yǔ)意影響的句子。這個(gè)句子中有 receive 和 is 兩個(gè)動(dòng)詞，但是沒有涉及到從句。university students receive training on job-related skills 已經(jīng)是個(gè)完整的句子，所以要用形式主語(yǔ)從句 it is necessary that university students receive training on job-related skills.
7. The number of female students in this university is higher than male students.
比較成份要一致。這句前邊主語(yǔ)是the number， 后邊比較對(duì)象是male students，所以正確的方式是 The number of female students in this university is higher than the number of male stu-dents. 或者The number of female students in this university is higher than that of male stu-dents.
8.Newspapers exert such tremendous influence that they cannot only bring about major changes to the lives of ordinary people but to the government’s decision.
Both...and/ not only…but also/ A and B都屬于并列結(jié)構(gòu)，前后連接成份要一致。這句not only 后邊是動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)，but后確是 to the government’s decision。所以我們可以改成Newspapers exert such tremendous influence that they cannot only bring about major changes to the lives of ordinary people but affect the government’s decision。
9.Although teenagers may be included in family decisions, but they are not ultimately re-sponsible.
這個(gè)句子的錯(cuò)誤在雅思口語(yǔ)中經(jīng)常見到，也是受漢語(yǔ)語(yǔ)意影響，但是在英語(yǔ)中although和but都是連詞，在句子中只能有一個(gè)。同樣because和so也是一個(gè)道理。
10.Which kinds of knowledge and skills should universities provide has been argued for many years.
語(yǔ)序錯(cuò)誤。主語(yǔ)從句，賓語(yǔ)從句都可以用疑問詞what/which/ whether 等引導(dǎo)，但一定要記住，后邊加正常語(yǔ)序的句子。should universities provide 語(yǔ)序錯(cuò)誤，應(yīng)該是which kinds of knowledge and skills universities should provide has been argued for many years，是which kinds of 引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句。
這十個(gè)雅思句子語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤都是劉麗老師在教學(xué)中發(fā)現(xiàn)的比較低級(jí)和常見的錯(cuò)誤，其實(shí)，雅思口語(yǔ)和寫作可以使用簡(jiǎn)單句式，但是一定要確保句子準(zhǔn)確，這樣才能提高分?jǐn)?shù)實(shí)現(xiàn)突破，希望各位考生屠鴨順利。
