六級高分作文_關(guān)于大學(xué)生宿舍
關(guān)于大學(xué)生宿舍
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay stating the advantages and disadvantages of living in college dormitories following the outline given below. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words:
The disadvantages of living in a college dormitory;
The advantages of living in a college dormitory;
My opinion.
審題立意
1. 導(dǎo)語解讀：要求考生根據(jù)所給提綱就“住大學(xué)生宿舍的利弊”這一話題寫一篇英語文章。
2. 文章立意：住大學(xué)生宿舍有不好的一面，比如缺乏隱私、容易引起沖突等，但盡管如此，住學(xué)生宿舍益處多多，比如鍛煉學(xué)生生活自理能力、培養(yǎng)學(xué)生與人相處的能力等，因此，住大學(xué)生宿舍，利大于弊。
寫作思路
1. 第一段闡述住大學(xué)生宿舍的弊端。
2. 第二段論述住大學(xué)生宿舍的好處。
3. 第三段闡述個人的觀點：認(rèn)為住大學(xué)生宿舍利大于弊。
參考范文
Many students are obliged to share accommodation with others in college. For them, the lack of privacy is the biggest challenge. And there may even be conflicts in the dormitory due to different habits. 1
Despite the above disadvantages, there are still many advantages for sharing a dormitory with others. 2 First 3 , because freshmen are far away from their families and old friends, roommates often become the natural company to conquer the loneliness and homesickness in their new life. Second 3 , since college is not all about study, sharing a room with others provides an opportunity for the students to develop communication skills to deal with different people. Besides 3 , roommates can learn from each other.
In conclusion, I think that there are more advantages than disadvantages in living in college dormitories. So we should learn to overcome the problems that may arise, and make friends with our roommates so as to enjoy a colorful campus life. 4
在大學(xué)里，很多學(xué)生不得不與他人同住。對他們來說，最大的挑戰(zhàn)是缺少隱私。宿舍成員間甚至?xí)捎谏盍?xí)慣不同而產(chǎn)生沖突。
盡管有以上弊端，與他人同住一個宿舍仍有諸多益處。首先，大學(xué)新生遠(yuǎn)離家人和老朋友，室友通常會自然而然地成為他們克服孤獨和思鄉(xiāng)情緒而迎接新生活的同伴。其次，由于大學(xué)不僅僅是學(xué)習(xí)知識的地方，而與他人同住也為學(xué)生們提供了一個可以發(fā)展和不同的人打交道的能力的機會。另外，室友們還可以互相學(xué)習(xí)。
總之，我認(rèn)為住學(xué)生宿舍利大于弊。因此我們應(yīng)該學(xué)會克服可能出現(xiàn)的各種問題，與室友成為好朋友，以便享受多彩的校園生活。
范文點評
1. 介紹住大學(xué)生宿舍的弊端。
2. 采用讓步轉(zhuǎn)折的方式，引出住大學(xué)生宿舍的益處。
3. 從三個方面具體闡述住大學(xué)生宿舍的好處。
4. 總結(jié)全文并表明自己的觀點：住學(xué)生宿舍利大于弊；同時提出倡議。
要點用法
be obliged to 不得不
despite prep. 盡管，不管
freshman n. 大一新生
accommodation n. 住處
company n. 同伴，陪伴
conquer v. 克服
in conclusion 總之
句法點評
1. Despite the above disadvantages, there are still many advantages for sharing a dormitory with others.
該句既總結(jié)上文，又引出下文；同時，關(guān)鍵詞緊扣提綱，點明主旨；despite表明讓步轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。
2. In conclusion, I think that there are more advantages than disadvantages in living in college dormitories.
用in conclusion引出個人觀點，總結(jié)全文。
