Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Being a Good Listener . You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words according to the following guidelines:
People are often good talkers instead of good listeners.
Being a good listener helps one become a better communicator.
The ways to become a good listener.
審題立意
1. 導(dǎo)語(yǔ)解讀：要求考生根據(jù)給定的提綱就“學(xué)會(huì)傾聽(tīng)”這一話題進(jìn)行闡述，并論述如何成為一名好的傾聽(tīng)者。
2. 文章立意：人們往往善于說(shuō)而不愿意聽(tīng)別人說(shuō)，然而好的傾聽(tīng)者會(huì)使自己在交際中大受歡迎，因此要學(xué)會(huì)傾聽(tīng)。
寫作思路
1. 第一段按照提綱描述傾訴者往往比傾聽(tīng)者更多。
2. 第二段按照提綱闡述好的傾聽(tīng)者會(huì)成為更棒的交流者。
3. 第三段按照提綱闡述如何成為好的傾聽(tīng)者。
參考范文
Being a Good Listener
Being a good listener is more and more difficult nowadays because people are often good talkers instead of good listeners. When we are happy, we will like to share happiness with others, making others know our enjoyment. 1 But when we are not in good mood, we are in great need of someone who can listen to us. 2
Being a good listener helps one become a better communicator. 3 A good listener not only listens to others, but also comforts them. To be a good listener can help us make good friends with others, and help us become a better communicator. Good listening also shows respect, promotes understanding, and improves interpersonal relationship. The one who listens to others will be easy going and people like to make friends with him. Whenever the listeners are stuck in trouble, their friends are willing to help them.
How to become a good listener? Each of us should listen more to others. 4 Parents should listen more to their children to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students to build a good relationship with them; students should listen more to their classmates to help and learn from each other.
成為好的傾聽(tīng)者
成為一個(gè)好的傾聽(tīng)者如今越來(lái)越難，因?yàn)槿藗兺呛玫膬A訴者，而不善于傾聽(tīng)。開(kāi)心時(shí)，我們會(huì)樂(lè)意和別人分享快樂(lè)，讓他人了解自己的快樂(lè)，但是當(dāng)我們心情不好的時(shí)候，我們非常需要一個(gè)人來(lái)傾聽(tīng)我們的心聲。
成為好的傾聽(tīng)者有助于一個(gè)人成為更棒的交流者。傾聽(tīng)者不僅要傾聽(tīng)他人，還要去安慰他們。成為一個(gè)優(yōu)秀的傾聽(tīng)者可以幫助我們和別人交朋友，有助于我們變成更好的交流者。善于傾聽(tīng)還會(huì)顯示尊重之心，促進(jìn)理解，改善人際關(guān)系。善于傾聽(tīng)他人的人很好相處，人們喜歡和他交朋友。每當(dāng)傾聽(tīng)者陷入麻煩之中，他們的朋友都愿意伸出援手。
如何成為好的傾聽(tīng)者？每個(gè)人都應(yīng)該多多傾聽(tīng)。父母應(yīng)多傾聽(tīng)孩子的想法，從而縮小代溝。老師應(yīng)多傾聽(tīng)學(xué)生的心里話，建立良好師生關(guān)系。同學(xué)之間多傾聽(tīng)彼此心聲，互幫互助，相互學(xué)習(xí)。
范文點(diǎn)評(píng)
1. 開(kāi)篇簡(jiǎn)述提綱第一個(gè)內(nèi)容，人們傾向于做一個(gè)傾訴者而不是傾聽(tīng)者。
2. 首段末句指出人們心情不好的時(shí)候，非常需要有人傾聽(tīng)自己的心聲。
3. 第二段首句將提綱中的第二個(gè)內(nèi)容作為主題句展開(kāi)論述，緊扣要求。
4. 末段首句以設(shè)問(wèn)的方式既提到了提綱中的第三個(gè)方面，同時(shí)也作為主題句論述如何成為好的傾聽(tīng)者。
要點(diǎn)用法
enjoyment n. 樂(lè)趣
comfort v. 安慰
promote v. 促進(jìn)
interpersonal adj. 人與人之間的
stuck adj. 被困住的
narrow v. 縮小
句法點(diǎn)評(píng)
1. A good listener not only listens to others, but also comforts them.
not only...but also...結(jié)構(gòu)的使用，加深了句子表達(dá)的含義，表遞進(jìn)關(guān)系。
2. Whenever the listeners are stuck in trouble, their friends are willing to help them.
由whenever引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句加強(qiáng)了表達(dá)的語(yǔ)氣，whenever意為“每當(dāng)”。
