Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the impact of Internet on making friends based on the picture below. You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
審題立意
1. 導(dǎo)語(yǔ)解讀：要求考生根據(jù)漫畫(huà)的內(nèi)容就“互聯(lián)網(wǎng)對(duì)交友的影響”這一話(huà)題進(jìn)行論述。
2. 漫畫(huà)解讀：圖片上畫(huà)了一個(gè)小女孩兒和她的媽媽就交朋友這個(gè)話(huà)題在進(jìn)行面對(duì)面的交流。由注解文字可知，小女孩在學(xué)校不受大家喜歡，在臉譜社交網(wǎng)站上只有735個(gè)朋友，由此引發(fā)大家對(duì)互聯(lián)網(wǎng)對(duì)交友影響的思考。
3. 文章立意：每個(gè)人都需要朋友。如今，隨著科技的發(fā)展，人們不僅僅可以在現(xiàn)實(shí)生活中交朋友，還可以在網(wǎng)上交朋友。然而，網(wǎng)絡(luò)交友有利有弊，大家應(yīng)該慎重對(duì)待。
寫(xiě)作思路
1. 第一段簡(jiǎn)要描述漫畫(huà)內(nèi)容，突出互聯(lián)網(wǎng)對(duì)人們交友的影響之大。
2. 第二段通過(guò)舉例、引用等論證方式闡述網(wǎng)絡(luò)交友的利弊：網(wǎng)絡(luò)對(duì)交友有很多積極的影響，比如對(duì)內(nèi)向的人來(lái)說(shuō)就是一種不錯(cuò)的交友途徑。但由于互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的虛幻性，它又存在危險(xiǎn)。
3. 第三段提出互聯(lián)網(wǎng)交友趨勢(shì)不可逆轉(zhuǎn)，人們應(yīng)該謹(jǐn)慎對(duì)待，好好利用網(wǎng)絡(luò)而不是過(guò)度依賴(lài)網(wǎng)絡(luò)。
參考范文
As is revealed in the cartoon, a girl is talking about her friends with her mother, saying “I’m the least popular girl in school. I only have 735 Facebook friends!” 1 The girl’s remark may seem to be a paradox, yet after a careful thought we can’t help feeling the great impact that Internet has on the way people make friends. 2
Undoubtedly, Internet has some positive effects on making friends. 3 It enables people to make friends from different places. 3 Also, it makes it easier for introverted people who are too shy to approach others in reality to make friends online, just like the girl in the picture. 3 Every coin has two sides, so does making friends through Internet. 3 For example, as the network life is fictitious, it is easy to cheat another person online. The newspaper often reports that there are some people getting hurt or being killed when they date their net friends. 4
As far as I’m concerned, it is irreversible that Internet is changing people’s way of making friends. What people should do is being careful and make good use of it instead of being overly dependent on it. 5
如圖所示，一個(gè)女孩兒正在和她的媽媽聊她的朋友，她說(shuō)道：“我在學(xué)校里是最不受喜歡的女孩兒，我在臉譜社交網(wǎng)上只有735個(gè)朋友?！边@個(gè)女孩兒的話(huà)可能看起來(lái)有點(diǎn)兒自相矛盾，不過(guò)仔細(xì)思考后，我們不禁感嘆互聯(lián)網(wǎng)對(duì)人們交友的影響之大。
毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)，互聯(lián)網(wǎng)能夠?qū)挥旬a(chǎn)生一些積極的影響。網(wǎng)絡(luò)使得人們能夠與來(lái)自不同地方的人交朋友。同樣，它使得那些在現(xiàn)實(shí)中過(guò)于羞澀、不敢主動(dòng)與人交談的內(nèi)向的人更容易在網(wǎng)上交到朋友，就像圖畫(huà)中的小女孩一樣。事物都有兩面性，互聯(lián)網(wǎng)交友也是如此。比如，由于互聯(lián)網(wǎng)生活是虛幻的，欺騙別人是很容易的。報(bào)紙上經(jīng)常有關(guān)于人們?nèi)ヒ?jiàn)網(wǎng)友而受傷或遇害的報(bào)道。
在我看來(lái)，互聯(lián)網(wǎng)正在改變?nèi)藗兊慕挥逊绞?，這是不可逆轉(zhuǎn)的。人們應(yīng)該小心交友，充分利用互聯(lián)網(wǎng)而不要過(guò)度依賴(lài)它。
范文點(diǎn)評(píng)
1. 開(kāi)篇描述圖片的內(nèi)容。
2. 自然過(guò)渡，結(jié)合圖片中的文字準(zhǔn)確傳遞出這幅漫畫(huà)的寓意。
3. 從兩個(gè)方面論證了互聯(lián)網(wǎng)對(duì)于交友的好處，從另一個(gè)方面論證了利用互聯(lián)網(wǎng)交友的弊端，論據(jù)充分，論證有力。
4. 采用舉例論證，恰如其分，同時(shí)也體現(xiàn)了論證方法的多樣性。
5. 末段總結(jié)全文，表達(dá)作者觀(guān)點(diǎn)，指出利用互聯(lián)網(wǎng)交友這一趨勢(shì)不可逆轉(zhuǎn)，人們應(yīng)利用好互聯(lián)網(wǎng)而不是過(guò)度依賴(lài)它。
要點(diǎn)用法
reveal v. 顯示，表明
paradox n. 自相矛盾的說(shuō)法
have effects on 對(duì)……有影響
introverted adj. 內(nèi)向的，含蓄的
approach v. 接近，靠近
fictitious adj. 虛幻的，虛構(gòu)的
net friend 網(wǎng)友
irreversible adj. 不可逆轉(zhuǎn)的
dependent on 依賴(lài)于，依靠
句法點(diǎn)評(píng)
1. Every coin has two sides, so does making friends through Internet.
該句是四、六級(jí)作文中分析利弊時(shí)常用的過(guò)渡句式，從分析優(yōu)點(diǎn)自然過(guò)渡到分析缺點(diǎn)。相似的說(shuō)法還有Just as every coin has two sides, it is true of making friends through Internet。
2. What people should do is being careful and make good use of it instead of being overly dependent on it.
名詞性從句What people should do作主語(yǔ)，也可改為All that people should do。
