六級高分作文_畢業(yè)“啃老”現(xiàn)象
畢業(yè)“啃老”現(xiàn)象
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should briefly describe the picture, explain its intended meaning and then show your opinion about NEET phenomenon . You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
審題立意
1. 導(dǎo)語解讀：要求考生根據(jù)漫畫的內(nèi)容就“啃老”這一現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行簡述，并解釋這一現(xiàn)象背后的原因及自己的看法。
2. 漫畫解讀：從圖中可以看出，花白頭發(fā)的年邁父母正在用一只巨大的奶瓶喂養(yǎng)已經(jīng)大學(xué)畢業(yè)的兒子。兒子雖然大學(xué)畢業(yè)，卻空有畢業(yè)證，沒有工作，只靠父母養(yǎng)活度日。
3. 文章立意：“啃老”現(xiàn)象引起人們越來越多的關(guān)注。因此，文章由現(xiàn)象出發(fā)，探究其背后的原因并給出自己的看法。
寫作思路
1. 第一段簡要描述漫畫，然后引出“啃老”這一現(xiàn)象并解釋“啃老”的具體內(nèi)涵。
2. 第二段通過解析論證的方式闡述“啃老”現(xiàn)象背后的原因。
3. 第三段給出自己對“啃老”的看法。
參考范文
We can see in the picture that the white-haired parents are feeding their adult son, who has graduated from college but refuses to work and depends on his parents to live. 1 Here, the adult son is a typical NEET. NEET is an abbreviation for Not in Employment, Education or Training, referring to the young people who are unemployed, not enrolled in school or engaged in housework, and not seeking work or the technical training needed for work but seeking security from parents. 2
In my opinion, there are two reasons behind the phenomenon. 3 For one thing 4 , with the development and popularity of higher education, the number of graduates is increasing each year and the graduates have to face great employment pressure. With the fierce competition in the job market, some of them cannot stand out and then stay at home, relying on their parents. For another 4 , some graduates are generally dissatisfied with the options and opportunities available to them.
In any case, I think there is no excuse for any young people to refuse to work and simply depend on their parents. 5 They should accept their social role as an adult in seeking full-time employment after graduation or further training.
我們可以從圖中看到，白發(fā)蒼蒼的父母在給他們已成年的、大學(xué)畢業(yè)卻拒絕工作的“啃老族”孩子喂奶。圖中的孩子是一個(gè)典型的“啃老族”?！翱欣献濉笔且粋€(gè)縮寫詞，表示不就業(yè)，不升學(xué)，不進(jìn)修或參加就業(yè)輔導(dǎo)，指的是那些無業(yè)、不上學(xué)、不參與家務(wù)勞動(dòng)、也不去找工作或者尋求工作所需的技術(shù)培訓(xùn)而只是賴在家里尋求家長庇護(hù)的年輕人。
在我看來，這個(gè)現(xiàn)象背后有兩個(gè)原因。第一，隨著高等教育的發(fā)展和普及，每年的畢業(yè)生數(shù)量都在增加，畢業(yè)生必須要面對巨大的就業(yè)壓力。伴隨著求職市場的激烈競爭，他們中的一些人無法脫穎而出而回家靠父母生活。第二，總體來說，一些畢業(yè)生對于現(xiàn)有的選擇和機(jī)遇不太滿意。
任何情況下，我都認(rèn)為年輕人沒有理由拒絕工作，純粹依賴父母。他們應(yīng)該接受自己成年人的社會(huì)角色，畢業(yè)后去尋找全職的工作或者深造。
范文點(diǎn)評
1. 開篇簡要描述圖片的內(nèi)容，同時(shí)準(zhǔn)確傳達(dá)出這幅漫畫的寓意。
2. 自然過渡，引出“啃老”現(xiàn)象，緊扣作文話題。
3. 第二段首句點(diǎn)明要論述的現(xiàn)象背后的原因。
4. 分兩個(gè)層次論述了原因，清晰簡潔。
5. 末段首句明確表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)：年輕人不應(yīng)該以任何借口“啃老”。
要點(diǎn)用法
abbreviation n. 縮寫；縮寫詞
enroll v. 入學(xué)；登記，注冊
for one thing 首先，一則
stand out 脫穎而出
for another 其次
be dissatisfied with 對……不滿意
in any case 不管怎么說
句法點(diǎn)評
1. NEET is an abbreviation for Not in Employment, Education or Training, referring to the young people who are unemployed, not enrolled in school or engaged in housework, and not seeking work or the technical training needed for work but seeking security from parents.
這是一個(gè)很長的復(fù)雜句，包含了現(xiàn)在分詞短語referring to the young people，定語從句who are unemployed, not enrolled...or the technical training以及過去分詞短語needed for work，句式變化多樣。
2. For another, some graduates are generally dissatisfied with the options and opportunities available to them.
本句中采用了be dissatisfied with這一短語，意為“對……不滿意”；available to表示“對……來說是可以獲得的”。
