六級(jí)高分作文_全球變暖

　全球變暖

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should describe the picture, explain its intended meaning and then illustrate why we should pay more attention to global warming . You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

審題立意

1. 導(dǎo)語解讀：要求考生根據(jù)漫畫內(nèi)容就“全球變暖”這一話題進(jìn)行描述，并說明我們要重視全球變暖的原因。

2. 漫畫解讀：圖片上畫了兩只在聊天的動(dòng)物。由下面注解文字可知，它們說的是全球變暖的現(xiàn)象。鴨子說聞到對(duì)面的豬的味道像熏肉，夸張而又形象地表達(dá)出全球變暖的程度。

3. 文章立意：全球變暖帶來了許多危害，諸如海平面上升、自然災(zāi)害等，因此需要人類對(duì)此給予足夠的重視，行動(dòng)起來，保護(hù)地球。

寫作思路

1. 第一段簡要描述漫畫及注解文字，點(diǎn)明寓意。

2. 第二段從四個(gè)方面闡述全球變暖帶來的危害。

3. 第三段呼吁人類對(duì)全球變暖給予足夠的重視，并倡導(dǎo)人們行動(dòng)起來，保護(hù)地球。

參考范文

As is depicted in the picture, weather is becoming so hot that the duck even feels that the pig smells like bacon. A little exaggerated though it sounds, it is an indisputable fact that global warming is becoming increasingly severe. 1

Global warming has negative effects on many aspects. 2 Firstly 3 , global warming may cause the icebergs to melt, which may lead to a rise in sea level. As a result, some island nations will be submerged by the sea. Secondly 3 , due to global warming, natural disasters occur frequently, such as floods, hurricanes and so on. Thirdly 3 , the ecological balance will be destroyed and many creatures will disappear for ever with the aggravation of global warming. Fourthly 3 , the cost to compensate for the loss caused by global warming will be huge.

In conclusion, global warming is a serious problem. We should pay more attention to it. Let’s take actions, start from ourselves, advocate the low-carbon way of life, and contribute our efforts to the protection of the planet. 4

正如圖中所描述的，氣候變得如此之熱，以至于圖中的鴨子甚至感到，它對(duì)面的豬已經(jīng)散發(fā)出熏肉的味道。 雖然聽起來有些夸張，但是全球變暖日益嚴(yán)重是不爭(zhēng)的事實(shí)。

全球變暖帶來的危害是多方面的。首先，全球變暖可能會(huì)導(dǎo)致冰山融化，海平面上升，結(jié)果，一些島國將被海水淹沒。第二，由于全球氣候變暖，洪水、颶風(fēng)等自然災(zāi)害頻發(fā)。第三，生態(tài)平衡將遭到破壞，許多生物會(huì)隨著全球變暖加劇而永遠(yuǎn)消失。第四，為彌補(bǔ)因全球變暖帶來的損失，我們將付出沉重的代價(jià)。

總之，全球變暖是很嚴(yán)重的問題，我們應(yīng)該更加重視這個(gè)問題。讓我們行動(dòng)起來，從自身做起，倡導(dǎo)低碳生活方式，為保護(hù)地球貢獻(xiàn)自己的力量。

范文點(diǎn)評(píng)

1. 首段末句點(diǎn)明這幅漫畫的寓意：全球變暖日益嚴(yán)重。

2. 自然過渡，開始討論全球變暖帶來的危害。

3. 圍繞主題，分四個(gè)層次展開論述，有力支撐了全球變暖危害嚴(yán)重的觀點(diǎn)。

4. 末段呼吁人們對(duì)全球變暖給予足夠的重視，并倡導(dǎo)人們行動(dòng)起來，保護(hù)地球。

要點(diǎn)用法

exaggerated adj. 夸張的

submerge v. 淹沒

natural disaster 自然災(zāi)害

hurricane n. 颶風(fēng)

ecological balance 生態(tài)平衡

aggravation n. 惡化

compensate for 補(bǔ)償；賠償

advocate v. 提倡

low-carbon adj. 低碳的

句法點(diǎn)評(píng)

1. A little exaggerated though it sounds, it is an indisputable fact that global warming is becoming increasingly severe.

全句是包含though引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句的復(fù)合句。though引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句使用了倒裝語序，改成正常語序應(yīng)該是Though it sounds a little exaggerated。后半句為該復(fù)合句的主句，主句句首的it為形式主語，真正的主語是后面that引導(dǎo)的從句。

2. Let’s take actions, start from ourselves, advocate the low-carbon way of life, and contribute our efforts to the protection of the planet.

使用祈使句感召力更強(qiáng)，take，start，advocate和contribute四個(gè)動(dòng)詞排比使用，更有氣勢(shì)。