六級高分作文_人生就像一盒巧克力
人生就像一盒巧克力
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark “Life is like a box of chocolates. You never know what you are going to get .” You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to face a changeable life . You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
審題立意
1. 導語解讀：要求考生根據(jù)給定的話語，就“生活變化無?！边@一話題進行簡述，并闡述如何應對變化無常的生活。
2. 文章立意：生活是不斷變化的，存在著很多不確定的因素。但正是這種不確定的神秘感讓人不斷去探求生活的秘密。因此，我們要以正確的態(tài)度來應對多變的生活。
寫作思路
1. 第一段簡要闡述給定話語的含義。
2. 第二段論述雖然生活有不確定性，但這種挑戰(zhàn)讓人堅強。
3. 第三段論述如何以正確的態(tài)度應對多變的生活。
參考范文
“Life is like a box of chocolates. You never know what you are going to get.” That means we are never quite sure what will happen in the future of our life, or simply put, life is changeable. 1
Yes, life is changeable. 2 Gains and losses interchangeably coexist in life. Many successful people accept the fact that life is short and full of uncertainties. They also think the charm of life just lies in uncertainties. Maybe failures make us exhausted mentally and physically, but we bear the heavy burden and become stronger. 3
So what should we do to face a changeable life? 4 Flowers bloom and fade; life has ups and downs. We can’t control the world but we can control our attitude towards it. If we want to have no remorse during our lifetime, cherish the present day, and live in this moment. Don’t be so depressed when we’re at the lowest point in our life because there’s nowhere to go but up. The purpose of life is to live it, to taste and experience it to the utmost, to reach out eagerly and without fear for newer and richer experiences. 5
“人生就像一盒巧克力，你永遠也不知道下一顆將是什么滋味。”這句話的意思是，我們永遠不能完全確信未來會發(fā)生什么，或者簡單地說，人生是變幻莫測的。
是的，人生變幻莫測。得與失在人生中是交互共存的。許多成功人士接受了人生短暫并且充滿不確定性的事實。同時，他們認為人生的魅力恰恰在于那些不確定性。失敗可能會使我們身心俱疲，但我們也會因此忍辱負重并且變得更強大。
因此，我們要怎樣面對變幻莫測的人生？花開花謝，人生起伏。我們不可能掌控世界但我們可以掌控自己對世界的態(tài)度。如果我們不想在活著的時候留下遺憾，那么就珍惜今天，活在當下。當我們處在人生低谷的時候，不要太沮喪，因為無論朝哪個方向努力，都是向上的。生命的意義在于盡情生活，拼命品味和體驗，勇往直前、無所畏懼地去追求更新、更豐富的人生經(jīng)歷。
范文點評
1. 開篇簡要描述給定話語的含義。
2. 第二段首句自然過渡，引出生活的多變，緊扣作文話題。
3. 對比論證，論述生活雖多變但卻讓人在克服困難的過程中變得堅強。
4. 末段首句以疑問的句式提出如何應對多變的生活，自然過渡。
5. 論述以積極的態(tài)度應對生活。
要點用法
simply put 簡單地說
interchangeably adv. 可交換地
coexist v. 共存；和平共處
uncertainty n. 不確定
exhausted adj. 疲憊的
mentally adv. 精神上
physically adv. 身體上
bloom v. 開花
fade v. 凋謝；褪色
remorse n. 懊悔
句法點評
1. Many successful people accept the fact that life is short and full of uncertainties.
此句用了that引導的同位語從句，從句解釋fact 的具體內(nèi)容。
2. Flowers bloom and fade; life has ups and downs.
采用形象的描寫，使表達顯得更加生動。
