雅思寫(xiě)作中那些失敗的開(kāi)頭

俗話說(shuō)“好的開(kāi)端是成功的一半”，好的雅思寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭可以為你的文章增色不少，但是如果你的雅思作文開(kāi)頭不僅不出色，而且還犯下大錯(cuò)誤，這樣不僅會(huì)影響考官對(duì)你的印象，也會(huì)影響到你的雅思作文分?jǐn)?shù)。今天就跟大家分享的就是雅思寫(xiě)作錯(cuò)誤開(kāi)頭的整理，希望對(duì)大家的復(fù)習(xí)有所幫助。

雅思寫(xiě)作失敗開(kāi)頭一:晦澀不明

1-Should college students be allowed to get married?

This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……

修改方案：開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山 直奔主題

In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married。 Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information? (雅思真題)

Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life. Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!

雅思寫(xiě)作失敗開(kāi)頭二：中式英文人見(jiàn)人暈

典型失敗案例：Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……

Topic 2- The population problem The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.

Topic 3- Is there fairness in today’s business world? I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……

雅思寫(xiě)作失敗開(kāi)頭三：觀點(diǎn)模糊態(tài)度曖昧

典型失敗案例： Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married? I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……

希望雅思寫(xiě)作考生們吸取經(jīng)驗(yàn)，不要犯以上錯(cuò)誤，考試順利!