我最喜歡的生日禮物My Favorite Birthday Present

I have a party on my eleven birthday, many friends give me the present. There is a doll, a pen, a music box, a notebook, a book and a flower. My faverite present is the flower. The flower is very beautiful. Its colour is red. I like to smell it. I put it in a bottle of water. My mother says it is a rose. I can plant it in the pot. I water the flower everyday. I wish it can be beautiful forever.

在我11歲生日派對的時候，很多朋友給我送了禮物。禮物有一個洋娃娃，一支鋼筆，一個音樂盒，一本筆記本，一本書，還有一朵花。我最喜歡的禮物是花。這朵花非常漂亮。它的顏色是紅色的，我喜歡聞它。我把它放到一瓶水里。我媽媽說這是一朵玫瑰。我可以把它種在花盆里。我每天都給它澆水，我希望天能永遠(yuǎn)美下去。