你有沒有看過我演講的講義?
Yes, Mark.
看過了,馬克。
And I have some questions about the content.
關(guān)于內(nèi)容,我有一些問題。
Really?
是嗎?
Do you think I need to adjust the content of the presentation?
你認(rèn)為我需要調(diào)整演講的內(nèi)容嗎?
A little.
一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)。
For instance, I don't think the example you give in the introduction is really relevant...
例如,我認(rèn)為在介紹時(shí)你給出的例子并不相關(guān)…
...and the complexity of the last two sections of the presentation...
…演講稿最后兩部分的復(fù)雜性…
...may be too much to explain in the allotted time for this presentation.
…對(duì)于這個(gè)演講而言,在規(guī)定的時(shí)間內(nèi),解釋它需要花費(fèi)太多時(shí)間。
I guess I have a lot more work to do on the structure of the whole presentation.
我想對(duì)于整個(gè)演講結(jié)構(gòu),我還有很多工作要做。
Maybe after you work on it more, you can practice in front of me.
或許在你再在上面下點(diǎn)兒功夫之后,你可以在我面前練習(xí)。
Great!
太好了!
You can tell me if I use good eye contact or have distracting mannerisms.
你可以告訴我,我是否注意和聽眾的眼神交流或是否慌亂無措。