GMAT作文模板使用方法及參考范文(五)

　　要想在GMAT作文中奪取高分，只是背幾個(gè)GMAT作文模板是遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)不夠的。新東方網(wǎng)GMAT頻道在此與大家分享一些備考技巧，讓GMAT作文滿分易如反掌。

　　【學(xué)生的作業(yè)】

　　Para2：

　　Undoubtedly, gov should take responsibility to subside art within limitation, because this can both promote the development of art of proper value and manipulate some side effect in the art’s boom, such as illegal speculation, at the same time.

　　Q：第一句如果是“先承認(rèn)前提就不要‘within limitation’”，此時(shí)怎么處理?

　　Furthermore, this support will call up public right attitude to the art

　　On the other hand, if gov provide whatever as the art industry wants, this will evoke the greed of this industry, thus breaking the social order. In other words(不可以放到下一段)，……

　　Besides, unlimited financial aid, such as appropriate and spiritual help, such as …, will weaken the investment on other public construction, such as office building, health care, etc.

　　Q：是否這段太細(xì)所以把“on the other hand”的話說完了呢?

　　III.結(jié)尾：

　　1.展望未來：如果把握不好度容易無病呻吟，所以建議用第二種

　　2. “欲擒故縱”：

　　邏輯原理是：雖然我不同意這觀點(diǎn)，但我承認(rèn)在某些方面還是對(duì)的，列出什么好處。但是，就我看來，壞處overweight好處。[LC3]

　　As given above, I disagree that gov should provide limited support to art. But(不要!) admittedly, it can also makes a different that gov meet whatever desire of the art industry in a short term: rescuing them from a financial crisis suddenly, recovering public’s confidence to the society and the market, etc. But all these above cannot amount to a greater thing than the side effects as I presented to me.

　　【comments from老鷹】：

　　1. 思維：可以

　　2. 詞匯和句子：很不好，太抽象。