2017年6月托福寫作真題回憶及范文賞析(一)

　　綜合寫作：

　　閱讀：

　　講鯨魚，一只鯨魚叫iceberg ， 還有一只叫ica，文章里說這倆貨不一 樣品種

　　原因一：長(zhǎng)相不一樣，它身上的patch 那個(gè)斑點(diǎn)

　　原因二：出現(xiàn)的水域不一樣 原因三：估計(jì)年齡不一樣。

　　聽力：教授不同意，覺得他倆就是一個(gè)鯨魚

　　原因一：這個(gè)雨的斑紋差別很小，而且本來同一種就有不同斑紋，

　　原因二：因?yàn)楸热缤瑯邮莍ceberg 它吃的食物也不一樣，這個(gè)家伙喜歡吃魚，所以它們生 活的區(qū)域不一樣。

　　原因三：估計(jì)鯨魚的年齡是有誤的，因?yàn)?0 歲的鯨魚和25，30 的都長(zhǎng)得差不多。

　　獨(dú)立

　　Do you agree that people easily learn from the friends beside them?

　　2017 年06 月10 日

　　綜合

　　閱讀：為什么短臉熊會(huì)有這么大的體型

　　1. 捕食大型哺乳動(dòng)物;

　　2. 追得上善于跑步的動(dòng)物;

　　3. 能嚇跑其他捕食者，他們留下的動(dòng)物尸體; 聽力：并非如此

　　1. 這種熊骨頭瘦小，不可能有這么大的力度;

　　2. 并不能跑很快，不能快速轉(zhuǎn)彎;

　　3. 沒有咀嚼骨頭的有力度的骨頭，不是吃尸體的動(dòng)物;

　　獨(dú)立

　　Some people like to buy and eat their meals at restaurants frequently, while others like to do this at home. Which do you prefer? Why?

　　解題思路： 喜歡在家做飯和吃飯：

　　1. 健康，吃的干凈;

　　2. 便宜省錢，不是很貴;

　　3. 小資，是一個(gè)自我放松和與周邊人社交的好機(jī)會(huì)。

　　題目分析： 此類二選一的題目只能二選其一。話題與生活息息相關(guān)，在家吃飯與在餐廳就餐。無論選 哪個(gè)應(yīng)該都很好想到分論點(diǎn)，所以只需要聯(lián)系自身具體做法，確定觀點(diǎn)和分論點(diǎn)即可。

　　總觀點(diǎn)： I prefer buying and eating my meals at restaurants. Nowadays, eating meals at restaurants is becoming a trend popular among young people. Seldom do they cook at home, and most of them even cannot cook themselves a hearty meal. As one of such young people, I prefer buying and eating my meals at restaurants. My reasons are given below.

　　首段直接表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)

　　First, food offered in restaurants is prepared by professional chefs. Thus, it is tastier than the food cooked at home. No one can be so confident to boldly claim that he or she cooks better dishes than those chefs. This is even truer for me. So, in order to have a taste of the delicious food which I can ever be able to cook, I prefer eating at restaurants. Plus, with the globalization, which has already penetrated catering industry for decades, a large variety of cuisines from different countries and regions are served at local restaurants. When I fulfill my mouth and stomach with different tastes and flavors, the great joy of living is maximized. In the meantime, such cuisines give me an opportunity to have a completely new dining experience, by which I have learned much about exotic culture. For example, when I firstly ate steak, I didn't know how to hold the fork and knife, what the difference between “ medium ” and “ medium well ” is, or whether I should better drink wine or champagne. After listening to the detailed explanation by the kind waitress, I came to know the answers to my questions. By the same token, eating sushi at a Japanese restaurant inspired me to know more about Japanese culture. This, then, became an impetus for my longing for travelling around the world.

　　餐廳提供的食物美味、多樣，并且異域食物提供了解國(guó)外文化的機(jī)會(huì)。

　　Another reason is that eating at restaurants save me large amount of time, which I can use for studying and working. Buying ingredients, preparing food and washing dishes afterward with no doubt consumes no less than two hours in total. In two hours, I can finish a lesson for Japanese language and also do some related quizzes. In two hours, I can hold a conference with my client to discuss further cooperation. In two hours, I can also play badminton with my friends in order to keep healthy. On the contrary, I will use two hours to have my not-so-tasty lunch if I cook by myself, and another two to have super. In this case, four hours are wasted every day and those who have someone prepare them for food or those who eat at restaurants have four more hours each day to equip themselves with new knowledge. Let's take a small example to further explain this. Two students from the same class are preparing for an important test. One of them always cooks dinner himself and continues to do so during this period. So, he has at most 3 hours to study every day. Another eats at restaurants and has 7 hours for the preparation. Which student do you think will get better result for the coming test?

　　節(jié)省時(shí)間用于工作或者學(xué)習(xí)。

　　Someone may reject by saying that cooking at home is more economical. I must say that they only see things with eyes but not with their hearts. Cooking at home indeed saves some money. But compared with the time it wastes, as I explained above, such money is nothing to speak of. When this time is used to study or work, the payback is more heartstirring than one can imagine after some time's accumulation. In addition, when people become more competent by making full use of the two more hours every day to expand their skill sets, they undoubtedly will be able to earn more money.

　　辯證段體現(xiàn)辯證思維。

　　In short, considering the advantages for eating at restaurants, I prefer to have my three meals at restaurants rather than to cook at home. And as far as I am concerned, those who enjoy the merriness of cooking with their own hands will sometimes need to sacrifice such merriness for more important and more rewarding things.

　　結(jié)尾段總結(jié)。

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