托?？谡Z話題解析：有趣的傳統(tǒng)服裝

　　Describe one type of interesting clothes in your country and explain why it is interesting.

　　學生對此話題的表述答案

　　What comes to me at first are Chinese traditional school uniforms. They are very interesting and worth studying from my own opinion. These uniforms are all kinds of old-fashioned designs and has undergo slight changes in the past decades. For example, before college, whenever I went to a new school, I always received a similiar pair of pants and a jacket as my uniform. Despite the uncomfortableness to wear, students in China are always required to wear these uniforms when attending schools. I think this kind reflects the Chinese teaching methods that is teachers are always the most authoritative ones in class and students should always follow the rules and listen to their teachers. I think these clothes reflects something in the basic foundamental education system.

　　語法方面出現的錯誤(Grammar)

　　1 Chinese traditional————traditional Chinese

　　2 all kinds of old fashion design————all have an old fashion design

　　3 undergo————underwent

　　表達部分存在的問題(Expression)

　　1 that is (delete)

　　2 these clothes reflects————these clothes reflect

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　　What comes to me at first are traditional Chinese school uniforms. They are very interesting and worth studying in my own opinion. These uniforms all have an old fashioned design and had undergone slight changes in the past decade. For example, before college, whenever I went to a new school, I always received the similiar pair of pants and a jacket as my uniform. Despite their uncomfortableness to wear, students in China are always required to wear these uniforms when attending schools. I think this kind reflects the Chinese teaching methods—teachers are always the most authoritative ones in class and students should always follow the rules and listen to their teachers. I think these clothes reflect something foundamental in the education system.