如何檢驗自己的雅思寫作水平是否提升？

烤鴨們都知道劍橋雅思每本書后都給出了考官范文，大小各兩篇，還有兩大兩小是沒有范文的。當(dāng)我們認(rèn)真研讀已給范文后，應(yīng)如何檢驗自己的寫作水平是否提升呢?聽力課堂雅思小編建議大家選擇剩下的幾個沒有給出范文的題目，看看自己是否很好地吸收和應(yīng)用了考官范文的優(yōu)點(diǎn)(詞匯，語法，句型，邏輯結(jié)構(gòu))。學(xué)會從考官的角度思考作文，分?jǐn)?shù)就不會太低。

劍8Test4大作文題目

In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.

What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

雙語例文：

當(dāng)今，人們的身體狀況并不樂觀，肥胖和不良身體狀況的人越來越多。關(guān)于如何遏制這個不樂觀的趨勢，我認(rèn)為可以通過政府和個人共同努力而實現(xiàn)的。

Currently, an increasing number of people have suffered obesity and negativehealth conditions. However, curbing this pessimistic trend could not be realized without the joint efforts of both the government and the citizens. (33 words)

造成這個趨勢的原因有很多。首先，是缺少運(yùn)動。由于競爭大，壓力大，更多的時間都是坐在電腦前工作，而不運(yùn)動從而導(dǎo)致肥胖，which導(dǎo)致一些疾病，例如高血壓，抑郁癥，失眠，心臟病。這些疾病以及治療疾病的藥物都對身體造成強(qiáng)烈的損害，所以體重的增長構(gòu)成公眾健康的嚴(yán)重威脅。除此之外，工作時間長--沒時間自己做飯--飲食不健康，例如飲食不規(guī)律。就像很多人喜歡吃快餐一樣，雖然節(jié)省時間，但是高熱量的食物這是主要導(dǎo)致肥胖的飲食原因。由于以上兩個原因所導(dǎo)致的肥胖，很有肯能被基因遺傳給下一代，或者以上不健康的飲食會影響下一代的飲食習(xí)慣。

Numerous factors contribute to such a tendency. First of all obesity linked tolacking of exercises attribute to the intensive competition and heavy pressurefrom work and life. Individuals tend to work in front of the screen for a great part of life so that little time is spared for sports activities. Such a behavior causes obesity, which leads to various illnesses (including hypertension, insomnia, heart disease). Further these diseases and treating medicals for them could lead to severe damage to physical well-beings. Therefore, the constant increase of weight has posed a serious threat to the public. In addition, little time for cooking independently due to the long working time mentioned also leads to unreasonable living habits (like irregular meals and unhealthy diets). For example, fast food, as a time-saving eating habit, is attributed to the increasing weigh among the general population. Obesity coming from the above two reasons is either likely to heritage to the next generation via genes or prone to have a pessimistic influence on their children’s lifestyles. (171 words)

然而，我認(rèn)為以上問題是可以解決的。國家要首先制定一些保護(hù)人們健康的政策和措施。例如限制加班時間來保證人們的休息;管理食品和餐館來確保人們飲食健康;開設(shè)一些公益的心理咨詢室來鼓勵人們樹立正確的健康意識。其次，提高公民身體素質(zhì)同樣也需要人們的努力，所以政府要提高人們對健康的認(rèn)識。例如，推廣一些公益廣告，修建免費(fèi)的運(yùn)動器材，發(fā)放蔬菜水果采購補(bǔ)貼，讓人們主動參與到維護(hù)健康的行動上來。此外，個人盡可能少地選擇脂肪含量高的食物，積極主動地運(yùn)動來提高自身健康水平。

Nevertheless, the issues referred to above can be addressed strategically.

In the first place, effective policies and measures should be adopted by the authorities to guarantee human being’s fitness. For example, limit working time to ensure enough leisure time, regulate diet-related organization (like producers or restaurants) to coordinate healthy eating as well as establish psychological consultation to encourage positive attitude towards health. Besides, improving the levels of public health cannot be the government’s duty alone. Citizens share as much responsibility as the local authority does by being inserted with clear awareness of keeping fit.Thus, health-related advertising campaign, free public sports facilities and proper subsidy for fruits and vegetables are required to encourage more individuals to get involved in practical actions. (121 words)

總之，我認(rèn)為通過政府的各項措施以及人們對健康問題的重視，人們的生活方式將會不斷的完善，從而不健康的生活趨勢將得到有效地解決。

In conclusion, if the measures could be implemented and fitness could be laid more emphasizes on, the lifestyles of people will be enhanced constantly, thus diminishing the negative impacts of this unhealthy tendency. (33 words)