Describe a garden you visited you should say :
1. where it is
2. how it looks like
3. what people do there / what you did there
4. how you felt about it and why you like to visit it .
高分參考:
1.I ‘d like to talk about the city botanic garden, which is located in the beautiful suburb . It’s a stone’s throw from my work place . I like to go there from time to time . Today , it’s become a popular tourist attraction , seeing tens of millions of visitors from all over the worldevery year .
2.It’s a breathtaking, sensationally gorgeous garden. It has an amazing landscape . There are many kinds of flowers , for example : rose ,lily , jasmine , sunflowers. some flowers are very rare. I can’t even telltheir names . When they blossom , the air would be filled with sweetfragrance , which makes it a paradise for people who want to get away from the stressful urban life .
3.I usually go there with my parents at weekends . We’d have a picnic ,but most of time , just wonder around, check out those amazing plants . Once a year , it holds a grand flower exhibition .it usually lasts a few day .During that period of time , hundreds of kinds of flowers would be displayed to the visitors . for flower lovers , it’s a carnival .
4.Lastly , let me tell you why I like to visit it . it’s a cheerful place . the flower scent makes me forget all the stress I have in life . If there’s something on my mind , I’d go there,find a place to be alone for a moment . I feel like I can find the inner peace there .After all these years , it’s become a very special place for me .
That's what I want to say for this topic .
Thank you for your time .
得分必備語料:
1. I ‘d like to talk about the city botanic garden, which is located in the beautiful suburb: 我想要來聊一下坐落于美麗市郊的城市植物園
2. it’s a stone’s throw from my work place: 離開我工作的地方只有一步之遙
3. from time to time: 時不時 (習(xí)語)
4. tourist attraction: 旅游景點
5.It’s a breathtaking, sensationally gorgeous garden:(這是一個很地道的表達方式, 比beautiful 要強太多了)沒到讓人嘆為觀止的花園
6:It has an amazing landscape:風(fēng)景很美
7: When they blossom , the air would be filled with sweet fragrance , which makes it a paradise for people who want to get away from the stressful urban life : (這是一定要背的得分很高的句子。首先他是復(fù)合句, 語法的分?jǐn)?shù)自然會走高。而且用詞和話題息息相關(guān)。格調(diào)也很高。)當(dāng)鮮花盛開的時候,空氣中會彌漫甜甜的花香, 那時候花園成為了一個人們躲避生活壓力最好的地方。
8. wonder around, check out those amazing plants:散散步, 看看植物
9. grand flower exhibition:盛大的花展
10. Lastly , let me tell you why I like to visit it :(這是連接句, 在考試中這會在連貫度上給你帶來更高的分?jǐn)?shù), 而普遍來說考生們是不會的)
11.it’s a cheerful place . the flower scent makes me forget all the stress I have in life . (這個理由理所當(dāng)然是說花園的第一理由,格調(diào)也會很高, 之前已經(jīng)用過了fragrance , 這邊我會選擇換詞, scent 會給我?guī)砀叩脑~匯分, 還有注意細(xì)節(jié),make sb do sth )
12. After all these years , it’s become a very special place for me: 多年后,這個花園對我來說已經(jīng)成為了一個很特別的地方。(注意細(xì)節(jié), after all these years , 這是個很好的口語說法, 很自然的轉(zhuǎn)折)
13.That’s what I want to say for this topic .Thank you for your time :(這是禮貌的結(jié)尾, 你在考試中一定沒有說過。良好的態(tài)度會給你帶來更高的映像分。)
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