英語
四級改錯(cuò)例題:成功是否取決于運(yùn)氣
原文
Many people believe that success in life depends on luck. They say that some people are lucky while others are not. However, I totally disagree with this idea. In my opinion, success is not just about luck, but it also requires hard work, dedication, and perseverance.
Firstly, hard work is essential for success. Without putting in enough effort, no one can achieve anything significant. Secondly, dedication is another key factor. People who are truly dedicated to their goals will never give up, even when faced with difficulties. Lastly, perseverance is also very important. It is the ability to keep going when things seem impossible.
In conclusion, success is not just about luck. It is about putting in the necessary effort, staying dedicated to our goals, and persevering in the face of challenges.
文章概要
本文討論了成功是否僅取決于運(yùn)氣。作者認(rèn)為成功不僅僅是運(yùn)氣的問題，還需要努力工作、專注和毅力。文章列舉了成功所需的三個(gè)關(guān)鍵因素：努力工作、專注和毅力，并分別進(jìn)行了闡述。
答案解析
1.錯(cuò)誤：In my opinion, success is not just about luck, but it also requires hard work, dedication, and perseverance.
更正：In my opinion, success is not just about luck; it also requires hard work, dedication, and perseverance.
解析：“but”的使用。在并列結(jié)構(gòu)中，當(dāng)兩個(gè)句子由并列連詞連接時(shí)，通常不需要在兩個(gè)句子中都使用主語。因此，應(yīng)將“but it”改為“but”。
2.錯(cuò)誤：Secondly, dedication is another key factor.
更正：Secondly, dedication is also a key factor.
解析：“another”的使用。由于前文并沒有提到其他的“key factor”，因此使用“another”并不準(zhǔn)確，應(yīng)改為“also”。
3.錯(cuò)誤：People who are truly dedicated to their goals will never give up, even when faced with difficulties.
更正：People who are truly dedicated to their goals will never give up, even when faced with difficulty.
解析：“difficulties”的使用。當(dāng)與“faced with”連用時(shí)，“difficulty”通常用作單數(shù)形式，表示“面對困難”的概念。
4.錯(cuò)誤：In conclusion, success is not just about luck.
更正：In conclusion, success is not solely dependent on luck.
解析：“not just about”的表達(dá)。為了增加詞匯的多樣性，可以將其替換為“solely dependent on”。
5.錯(cuò)誤：It is about putting in the necessary effort, staying dedicated to our goals, and persevering in the face of challenges.
更正：It is about putting in the necessary effort, remaining dedicated to our goals, and persevering in the face of challenges.
解析：“staying”的使用。雖然“staying”本身沒有錯(cuò)誤，但在這里使用“remaining”可以增加詞匯的豐富性。
以上就是英語
四級改錯(cuò)示例，在英語
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