商務英語(BEC)考試初級寫作模擬題講解(三)

Read this text about a Japanese company.

. In most of the lines (36-40) there is one extra word which does not fit in. One or two line, however, are correct.

. If the line is correct,put a tick (√)in the space on your Answer Sheet.

. If there is an extra word in the line, write that word in the space on your Answer Sheet.

Example :

For short distance, it uses its own’ self airplanes. For international ......self......

flights it calls on leading airlines including the Japanese Airlines. ...... ...... √...... . ......

LUFTHANSE, WELCOME ON ABOARD

It’s only normal that a service-oriented company should look to other

36. service companies as partners. The reputation for excellence of every each

37. of DHL’s partners strongly motivated its choice. To make that sure that

38. everyone made the right choice,they agreed to give their final answer

39. after a two-year old trial period. Faster service,better airport

40. facilities; the benefits to the customers are clear. They will also grow up

in the near future,allowing customers to choose from so many services.

section B

Questions 41-45

. A student has translated a piece of news in a Chinese newspaper back into English and asked you to check it.

. In each line there is one wrong word.

. For each numbered line (41-45) write the correct word in the space on your Answer Sheet.

Example:

They have selled their products in 20 countries. ...... ......sold ...... ......

British farmers are troubled by straw. They produce more than

41. ten millions tons every year as a byproduct of farming and

42. their animals need only four million tons for bedding and fooding.

43. Since European air-pollution laws forbid people to burnt straw,

44. the extra straw is plowed under or leave to rot. Scientists have

45. now found a way to put the straw to good using by changing a neat-loving bacterium in the straw.

36. every是多余,應刪掉. each of 每一個，是固定搭配。

37. that是多余,應刪掉. make sure確保，也是固定搭配。

38. 沒有多余的詞.

39. 沒有多余的詞.

40. up是多余,應刪掉. grow就表示增長的意思，grow up成了長大的意思了。

Section B

41. millions應改為million million的用法，具體的幾百萬后面不用加s，如果是數(shù)百萬，用millions of.

42. fooding應改為food.food本身就表示食物的意思，一般提供食物直接用food就可以。

43. burnt應改為burn forbid to do sth,to后直接用動詞原形。

44. leaving應改為left.這一句是被動語態(tài)的，is后面要用過去分詞表示被動，而且leave和plowed是并列的兩個動作，由此也看出應該用left.

45. using 應改為use.make good use of sth.做用途講時直接用use，也有名詞的意思。