BEC中級寫作范文及講解(1)

　　題目：

　　You work for a company which is going to buy a set of equipment from China. You areasked to translate a lot of specifications and instructions within four months, which isimpossible. therefor you decide to advertise for two experienced translators as soon aspossible.

　　. Write a short note to Mr. Max Remington ,the Public Relation's manager. Ask for anadvertisement for two translators.　　. Explain the reason.　　. Mention your urgency.　　.Write 30-40 words on your Answer Sheet.

　　講解：

　　便條可以有題目，也可以省略題目?！　”銞l開篇須有稱呼語，但稱呼可以比較隨便?！　∪掌诓糠挚蓪懺诒銞l的右上角?！　∪掌诘暮炇鹜ǔＶ恍鑼懶瞧趲谆蛐瞧趲椎纳衔?、下午，也可只寫上午或下午和具體時間。 只寫日期也可以?！　”銞l結(jié)尾須署上留條人的姓名，位置在正文的右下角?！　”銞l的形式和內(nèi)容簡潔，故可以用幾句話概括?！　∥膬?nèi)語言盡量通俗口語化，簡單扼要，直截了當(dāng)，無需使用客套語言?！　”銞l雖簡單，但中心務(wù)必突出，更要注明活動的時間及地點?！　”銞l不需郵寄，不用信封。通常請人代為轉(zhuǎn)交。有時可寫在留言板和留言簿上。

　　基本寫作格式

　　便條內(nèi)容和類型不盡相同，可以靈活變通。但各類便條必須包括以下幾個基本要素;

　　1) Date：便條日期　　2) Salutation：稱呼　　3) Body：正文　　4) Signature：署名

　　范文：

　　Dear Mr. Max Remington ,　　As our company is purchasing a set of equipment ,a lot ofmaterials -have to be translated, which is impossible to do within four months. Could youadvertise for two experiencedtranslators in the newspapers? It is urgent.　　Yoursrespectfully,　　Sophia