雅思大作文語料庫：音樂課和體育課

Schools should teach children some academic subjects which will be beneficial to their future careers. Therefore, other subjects such as music and sports are not important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 學(xué)校應(yīng)該教給孩子們對于未來有益的課程，因此，音樂課和體育課不重要，是否認(rèn)同?

文章布局：讓步反駁寫法

作家立場：支持上音樂課以及體育課

思路拓展：

學(xué)習(xí)音樂的利好：

1. 增加生活情趣，培養(yǎng)藝術(shù)美感

2. 陶冶情操，放松身心

3. 加深對于生活的熱愛

學(xué)習(xí)體育的利好：

1. 增強(qiáng)免疫力，提高健康指數(shù)

2. 培養(yǎng)團(tuán)隊(duì)，合作，競爭的意識(shí)

3. 有效的方式培養(yǎng)友誼，增進(jìn)感情，鍛煉交際能力

學(xué)習(xí)音樂和體育的共同利好：

文體課程，有建設(shè)性地利用了時(shí)間，使學(xué)生們心滿意足，再也沒有無聊之感。 文體課程，幫助學(xué)生們實(shí)現(xiàn)了全面的發(fā)展。

點(diǎn)評：很多思路和語料庫適合寫作教育的目的。

老師原創(chuàng)語料庫：

1. Such is human nature to have fun and enjoy more free time 享受自由快樂是人之本性

2. As for most students, the priority should be given to their academic performance. 學(xué)生們，首先應(yīng)該重視學(xué)術(shù)表現(xiàn)

點(diǎn)評：反對音樂課和體育課

3. Efforts should be made by educator to help students embark on a healthier lifestyle. 教育者應(yīng)該努力，幫助學(xué)生選擇健康的生活方式

解析：embark on a healthier lifestyle選擇健康的生活方式

4. Having PE class could， to large extent， enhance students’ health index 體育課可以提高學(xué)生的健康指數(shù)

5. …… is an effective pressure-reducer …… 是很好的緩解壓力的方式

6. …… could help students to relax their bodies and ease their minds ……可以幫助學(xué)生放松身心

點(diǎn)評：萬能支持理由，口語寫作通用

7. mould one’s temperament 陶冶情操

8. …… must be beneficial to building one’s optimistic personality …… 有助于培養(yǎng)人樂觀的性格

9. deepen one’s love about life and art 加深對于生活和藝術(shù)的熱愛

10. Having PE or music class，by occupying spare time constructively， makes students contented, with no time for boredom. 上音樂體育課，通過有建設(shè)性地利用時(shí)間，使學(xué)生們心滿意足，再也沒有無聊之感

點(diǎn)評： 寫作亮點(diǎn)，重點(diǎn)背誦

11. …… enhance one’s competitiveness in the future job-seeking 提高擇業(yè)的競爭力

點(diǎn)評：適合寫作便于就業(yè)的課程

12. career-oriented knowledge and job-related skills 以擇業(yè)為導(dǎo)向的知識(shí)以及和就業(yè)相關(guān)的技能

點(diǎn)評：適合寫作支持學(xué)習(xí)實(shí)用性的課程

13. Education is a sort of intellectual investment and every investor desires to earn high interests， namely， a well-paying and decent career 教育是智力投資，人人渴望獲得高額的利息(良好的回報(bào))，即高薪的穩(wěn)定的職業(yè)

14. In light of this statement， some people argue that college teachers should give priority to career-oriented courses 因此，有人認(rèn)為老師應(yīng)該教授以擇業(yè)為導(dǎo)向的課程

點(diǎn)評：In light of this statement = therefore = hence = thereby = in this sense 因此

15. Introducing music and PE class into school curriculum could，to some extent， assist students realizing overall development and add spice to their dull routine of every day life. 鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生們上音樂課和體育課，可以很大程度上幫助學(xué)生們實(shí)現(xiàn)全面的發(fā)展以及增加他們生活的樂趣

點(diǎn)評：help sb do sth = assist sb doing sth = enable sb to do sth 幫助某人做……