雅思大作文語(yǔ)料庫(kù)：大學(xué)教育VS職業(yè)教育

【教育類】

Nowadays，most people learn academic study in university, but others think we should encourage to learn vocational skills more, do you agree or disagree? 現(xiàn)在，多數(shù)人在大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)，但是，有人認(rèn)為我們應(yīng)該學(xué)習(xí)更多的職業(yè)技能，是否同意?(2015年11月21日B卷考題)

【題目解析】本題為經(jīng)典教育話題改寫：可以理解為職業(yè)教育對(duì)比綜合教育，或者專才教育對(duì)比通才教育。

【相關(guān)話題】

【教育類】

In some countries, secondary schools aim to provide a general education across a range of subjects. In others, children focus on a narrow range of subjects related to a particular career. which is appropriate in today's world. 在一些國(guó)家，中學(xué)生會(huì)學(xué)習(xí)廣泛的課程，在一些國(guó)家，學(xué)生們會(huì)學(xué)習(xí)一些和未來(lái)?yè)駱I(yè)相關(guān)的課程，哪一種教育方式更加合適?

【謀篇布局】(讓步反駁)

首段：背景介紹+爭(zhēng)議焦點(diǎn)+作家立場(chǎng)

二段：讓步原題觀點(diǎn)的合理性

三段：反駁原題觀點(diǎn)的不合理

尾段：再次亮明觀點(diǎn)+總結(jié)理由

【思路拓展】

【職業(yè)教育的利好】

1. 人們的精力和時(shí)間有限，廣泛涉獵，難免蜻蜓點(diǎn)水。相反，集中精力學(xué)習(xí)一門課技能，可使人成為一個(gè)領(lǐng)域的專家。 人生的奮斗的過(guò)程就是追求稀缺的過(guò)程，你要成為那個(gè)不可替代者。

2. 職業(yè)培訓(xùn)學(xué)校培養(yǎng)的學(xué)生， 擇業(yè)更有競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力，因?yàn)樗麄兛梢赃m合特殊企業(yè)的需求。

【大學(xué)教育的利好】

1. 通才教育幫助人實(shí)現(xiàn)全面發(fā)展，培養(yǎng)多元的興趣和才華，可以使受教育者適應(yīng)未來(lái)不同領(lǐng)域的工作，因此，可以減少單一職業(yè)選擇帶來(lái)的失業(yè)風(fēng)險(xiǎn)。

2. 職業(yè)教育通常傳授的是以擇業(yè)為導(dǎo)向的知識(shí)，和就業(yè)相關(guān)聯(lián)的技能，僅是一種生存技能的培養(yǎng)，相反，通才教育不僅是傳授知識(shí)，還涉及到人的道德教育、性格培養(yǎng)、心靈成長(zhǎng)，因此，專才教育更能體現(xiàn)完美教育的真諦。

【范文賞析】

【首段】背景介紹 + 爭(zhēng)議焦點(diǎn) + 作家立場(chǎng)

Education is one of the key words of our time. A man without education, many of us believe is the victim of adversity. However，people’s views differ greatly as to whether or not specialist is superior to generalist. To voice my opinion, focusing on academic study in university enjoys more benefits.

【二段】 學(xué)習(xí)職業(yè)技能的利好

Granted，those who advocate vocational training are, to some extent, never without their reasons. First，zeroing in on vocational skills can help learners secure well-paid jobs quickly, therefore, the family’s financial burden can be greatly reduced. From our life, we can find some examples to prove that job candidates from vocational training schools are very popular because what they have learnt are career-oriented and job-related. Also，Jack-of-all-trades is master of none. In comparison with studying a wide range of subjects，specializing in specific field can make one stand out in a crowd considering that one’s time and energy is limited

【三段】接受大學(xué)教育的利好：

What I want to rebut, however, is that we can never ignore the immense value of academic study at university. The most glaring merit is that those who receive university education have plenty of room for career development because they have access to manifold knowledge and techniques. In addition to tapping one’s unlimited potentials in various aspects and helping one realize overall development, experiencing university life can bring more wonderful memories of colorful campus life. Last, this can benefit a nation, all-round education can train more comprehensive talents for a country，which will inject new life into the further development of a nation.

【尾段】亮明立場(chǎng)

Overall，my stand is that compared with attending vocational training schools，receiving university education is more feasible and rational because it helps students realize comprehensive development and cultivate more personal talents. Likewise, our society need talents with a wealth of knowledge.

【全文點(diǎn)評(píng)】

本篇主題明確、行文順暢、邏輯清晰、文風(fēng)樸素、偶以亮點(diǎn)詞匯點(diǎn)綴，可為考生賞析之佳作。老師原創(chuàng)范文只是雅思寫作之一種，文無(wú)定法，建議童鞋打造屬于自己的個(gè)性范文。2016年雅思有可能開(kāi)始機(jī)考，很多童鞋報(bào)考學(xué)校的寫作分?jǐn)?shù)也有要求提高的趨勢(shì)，唯有加強(qiáng)練筆，考試才能才高自現(xiàn)。

【經(jīng)典語(yǔ)料】

1. generalist n通才

2. specialist n專才

3. specialized education n專才教育

4. comprehensive education n通才教育

5. vocational training school n 職業(yè)培訓(xùn)學(xué)校

6. higher education = high education n 高等教育

7. acquire a range of subjects v 學(xué)習(xí)廣泛的課程

8. travel in the ocean of the knowledge v 暢游知識(shí)的海洋

9. avoid the possible risk of unemployment 避免潛在的失業(yè)的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)

10. Knowledge is not a burden 藝多不要身

11. be well-prepared for the future career challenges v為未來(lái)事業(yè)的挑戰(zhàn)做好充分準(zhǔn)備

12. a wide range of subjects will help one be well-prepared for to work in different fields in the future 學(xué)習(xí)廣泛的課程可以幫助一個(gè)人為未來(lái)不同領(lǐng)域的工作做好準(zhǔn)備

13. secure a decent job with promising future v找到體面的有前途的工作

14. excel in one specific field v 精通于一個(gè)特殊的領(lǐng)域

15. realize his or her all-round development. v實(shí)現(xiàn)全面的發(fā)展

16. have to face more risks of unemployment triggered by a single career choice v面對(duì)單一職業(yè)選擇帶來(lái)的失業(yè)的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)

17. …… is more feasible and rational …… 更加可行和理性

18. enhance one’s competitiveness in the future job-seeking v 提高未來(lái)?yè)駱I(yè)的競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力

19. Jack-of-all-trades is master of none. 樣樣精通，就是一無(wú)所精。

20. inject new life into the further development of a nation v給一個(gè)國(guó)家的發(fā)展注入新鮮活力