托福獨(dú)立寫作真題分析：你的人生你做主還是父母做主？

　　我的人生我做主

　　還是我的人生我父母做主？

　　天空一聲巨響，一道三月考題閃亮登場(chǎng)。近期，筆者發(fā)現(xiàn)有一道三月的考題是很多同學(xué)都比較感興趣的話題，那就是關(guān)于應(yīng)該讓父母決定孩子的人生還是應(yīng)該讓孩子自主做選擇。很多學(xué)生反饋這個(gè)話題的立場(chǎng)非常好抉擇，百分之九十九點(diǎn)九的學(xué)生都選擇應(yīng)該讓孩子自己做決定的立場(chǎng)，但是發(fā)現(xiàn)雖然非常堅(jiān)定地選了這個(gè)立場(chǎng)，卻寫不滿300字，能寫的點(diǎn)又很難展開。所以筆者就為各位同學(xué)帶來這篇獨(dú)立寫作的真題分析。希望同學(xué)們看完解析后都能茅塞頓開，下筆如有神，早日高中托福寫作狀元。

　　2021年3月10日托福獨(dú)立寫作題目：

　　Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Parents spend too much time trying to help determine the future of their children, children should be allowed to make their own choices.

　　題型類別：一般類題型

　　寫作思路：思考孩子自己做決定的好處以及家長(zhǎng)幫助孩子決定他們的未來的好處。讓孩子自己做決定的好處有孩子能夠變得更加獨(dú)立，能夠無悔青春。而家長(zhǎng)幫孩子做決定的好處是避免誤入歧途，能夠保證孩子在一個(gè)教育氛圍較好的環(huán)境中成長(zhǎng)。筆者個(gè)人立場(chǎng)比較傾向于支持孩子應(yīng)為自己的人生做決定。所以可以一個(gè)段落寫有助于培養(yǎng)獨(dú)立精神，另一個(gè)段落寫能夠人生無悔。第三個(gè)主體段寫一個(gè)讓步。

　　Body 1:

　　首先，孩子們自己做決定有利于磨練他們的獨(dú)立性。這是因?yàn)樗麄兛梢砸庾R(shí)到他們是應(yīng)該對(duì)自己的決定負(fù)責(zé)的獨(dú)立個(gè)體。當(dāng)他們習(xí)慣于自己做決定后，他們將喜歡每件事情都自己做決定。這就能幫助他們提升獨(dú)立自主性。而且有了這種比較獨(dú)立的能力后，孩子不僅可以在學(xué)業(yè)中受益，還可以在未來的職業(yè)中獲得切實(shí)的好處。因?yàn)橐环矫?，?dú)立的孩子更能自主學(xué)習(xí)，這將幫助他們?nèi)〉酶玫某煽?jī)。另一方面，一個(gè)獨(dú)立的人更容易適應(yīng)新的環(huán)境，尤其是新的工作環(huán)境。這意味著他們可能有更多的機(jī)會(huì)尋覓到一份心儀的工作并得到升職的機(jī)會(huì)。這是因?yàn)樗麄兏锌赡苋ゴ蟪鞘邪l(fā)展，而比較依賴父母相對(duì)不獨(dú)立的孩子可能更愿意和父母呆在偏遠(yuǎn)的地區(qū)從而失去這些機(jī)會(huì)。因此，讓孩子們自己決定走哪條路有助于培養(yǎng)獨(dú)立的能力。

　　To begin with, children making decisions by themselves is conducive tohoning their independence. This is because they can realize that they are individuals who are supposed to be responsible for their own actions or behaviors. When they are acclimated to take very small decisions by themselves, they would start to act on their own so their independence is fostered. What is more, with independence, not only could they reap the benefit of their studies but also obtain tangible boons in future occupations. For one thing, independent school children tend to studyspontaneously, which facilitates them getting better grades. For another, an independent person is prone to easily adapt to a new environment, especially a new working condition. This means that they could have more opportunities to find an ideal job and get promoted on the grounds that they could go to big cities, whereas dependent adolescents might need to live with their parents inremote areas. Accordingly, allowing children to decide which path to take on their own is supportive of training independent competence.

　　Body 2:

　　此外，孩子自己做決定可以避免后悔。詳細(xì)的來說是這樣，很多孩子都有一些父母比較反對(duì)的愛好。比如一些孩子對(duì)音樂行業(yè)很感興趣，希望以后能成為歌手。但是他們的父母希望他們成為工程師或老師。如果讓父母幫孩子做了人生選擇，這可能會(huì)讓孩子在未來感到遺憾。到那時(shí)候，孩子可能會(huì)責(zé)怪父母，讓他的人生充滿了遺憾。結(jié)果導(dǎo)致他們的關(guān)系變得疏遠(yuǎn)。因此，孩子們自己做決定可以使他們對(duì)未來的人生無悔。

　　Furthermore, making choices by themselves empowers children to avoid regrets. To elaborate, there tend to be certain interests commonly held by all children, and to which their parents are opposed. To illustrate, it is not new that a large number of children are interested in the music industry and hope to become singers, yet their parents wish them to become engineers or teachers. This may become cause for regret in the future, with children beginning to blame their parents for determining their lives, thereby making their lives full ofcountless regrets. As a result, those children might become estranged from their parents. Hence, children taking decisions by themselves enables them to have no regrets in later life.

　　讓步段:

　　誠(chéng)然，父母決定孩子的人生可以避免一些風(fēng)險(xiǎn)。眾所周知孩子在成長(zhǎng)的過程中面臨著許多誘惑如毒品，酒精和色情，而且一旦一些孩子接觸到這些，他們很有可能無法抵抗這份誘惑。例如有些人可能會(huì)沉溺于毒品或因?yàn)闈撛诘木揞~毒品販賣利潤(rùn)而變成一個(gè)毒販。在這種情況下，父母幫助孩子決定人生是可以一定程度上避免孩子接觸到這些誘惑的可能性。但是，這些案例的發(fā)生僅占極小部分。因?yàn)榇蠖鄶?shù)兒童通過正確的引導(dǎo)是可以分辨是非，并自主地做出正確的決定。

　　Admittedly, parents determining a child’s life could avoid certain risks. It is widely acknowledged that in the course of their growth teenagers confront plenty oftemptations such as drugs, alcohol, as well as pornography and some children cannot resist the lure to get involved in those fields. For instance, some might get addicted to drugs or plan to become drug dealers in the light of the potential for huge profits. In that case, their parents could help their children avert the likelihood of them accessing those temptations by determining their lives. Nevertheless, these cases only account for a small proportion of children going astray, as most children coulddifferentiate right from wrong and come to the right decision by themselves.

參考詞匯：

　　Be conducive to 有益于

　　Hone v.磨練

　　Be acclimated to 適應(yīng)于/習(xí)慣于

　　Reap the benefit of 獲取…利益

　　Tangible boons 實(shí)實(shí)在在的好處

　　Spontaneously adv 自發(fā)地

　　Be prone to 傾向于

　　Remote areas 偏遠(yuǎn)地區(qū)

　　Be supportive of 有益于

　　Empower sb to do 使某人做…

　　Countless regrets 數(shù)不盡的悔憾

　　Become estranged from 變得疏遠(yuǎn)

　　Temptation n.誘惑

　　Resist the lure 抵抗誘惑

　　Drug dealer毒販

　　Go astray 誤入歧途

　　Differentiate right from wrong 明辨是非

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