托福寫作滿分結(jié)尾的幾種方式

　　E.g.1

　　When a country develops its technology; the traditional skills and ways of life die out.It is pointless to try and keep them alive.

　　To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

　　In conclusion, without suggesting that all technology is necessarily good,I think it is by no means ‘ pointless’,in any way, to try to keep traditions alive with technology.We should not ignore technology,because it can be our friend and support our way of life.

　　這個(gè)結(jié)尾段落明確地提出了自己的觀點(diǎn)，不是所有的科技都是好的，但是科技也不是完全沒有用處的。

　　托福寫作招式二：不要添加新的信息

　　E.g.2

　　Happiness is considered to be very important in life.

　　Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?Like self-awareness，this is also very difficult to achieve’but I think these are the two factors that may be the most important for achieving happiness.

　　用一句話明確自己的觀點(diǎn)，幸福很難定義，可能有兩個(gè)因素起到作用。

　　托福寫作招式三：2-3個(gè)句子為宜

　　E.g.3

　　Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational; otherwise they are a complete waste of time.Do you agree or disagree?Finally,I think it is also important to remember that children need to relax as well as work.If everything they do must have some educational or academic relevance,then they will soon get tired of studying altogether,which is the last thing parents would want.

　　兩句話，作者的態(tài)度很明確，學(xué)生不可能花所有的時(shí)間去學(xué)習(xí)，否則就會完全失去對學(xué)習(xí)的興趣，所以也應(yīng)該給學(xué)生一些放松的時(shí)間。

　　一般在結(jié)尾段的開始部分，考生就應(yīng)該給考官一個(gè)明確的信號詞，讓考官了解文章已經(jīng)進(jìn)入尾聲了。這里所謂的信號詞就是一些結(jié)尾段的套句：

　　信號詞：Finally，to sum up，in conclusion，in brief，therefore，thus，overall

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　　句型：

　　1. it can be concluded that…

　　2. we can find that…

　　3. I think it is also important to remember that

　　4. the main point is to make sure that

　　5. I believe that/ Personally， I think that/ I would say that/ I agree that/ My view is that

　　托福寫作招式四：可采用的技巧

　　1.總結(jié)式(重述前文)

　　把在前文中的觀點(diǎn)在結(jié)尾段進(jìn)行重述，但是不能出現(xiàn)與開頭段或者題目中的單詞重復(fù)。

　　E.g.4

　　*In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour.

　　What do you think are the cause of this?

　　What solutions can you suggest?

　　Perhaps parenting classes are needed to help them to do this,and high quality nursery schools could be established that would support families more in terms of raising the next generation.The government should fund this kind of parental support,because this is no longer a problem for individual families,but for society as a whole.

　　把solutions進(jìn)行簡單地再次描寫—父母、好的托兒所、政府的資金扶助。

　　*Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

　　I think,therefore,that governments need to raise this awareness in the generalpublic.Children can be educated about environmental issues at school,but adults need to take action.Governments can encourage such action by putting taxes on packaging,such as plastic bags,by providing recycling services and by fining households and shops that do not attempt to recycle their waste.

　　重述上文的內(nèi)容，由政府采取措施—提高意識(children & adult)

　　具體措施(提高價(jià)格、循環(huán)利用、罰款)

　　2.兩分式

　　把文章涉及到的主題人或者物分成兩種，對其進(jìn)行分別說明。

　　E.g.5

　　*In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work.Some people regard this ad completely wrong,while others consider it as valuable work experience,important for learning and taking responsibility.What are your opinions on this?

　　Nevertheless,in better economic circumstances,few parents would choose to send their children out to full-time paid work.If learning responsibilities and work experienceare considered to be important,then children can acquire these by having light,part-time jobs or even doing tasks such as helping their parents around the family home,which are unpaid,but undoubtedly of value in children’s development。

　　對于有錢的家庭而言，家長很少送小孩去做童工;如果是為了錢或者其他，可做兼職。

　　*Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change.Others,however,think that change is always a good thing.

　　Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

　　In conclusion,I would say that change can be stimulating and energizing for individuals when they pursue it themselves,but that all change,including that which is imposed on people,does not necessarily have good outcomes.

　　如果是人們自己的選擇那么改變是一件好的事情，但如果是被強(qiáng)加于身，改變則不會帶來任何可喜的效果。

　　3.折中式

　　很難判斷In conclusion，I do not think其中到底誰占據(jù)主導(dǎo)地位，或者什么是重要的，兩者是缺一不可的，需共同存在。

　　E.g.6

　　Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life.

　　That either nature or nurture is the major influence on a person,but that both have powerful effects.How these factors interact is still unknown today and they remain largely unpredictable in a person’s life.

　　兩者是缺一不可的，天賦和后天培養(yǎng)同等重要。