托福獨(dú)立寫作難點(diǎn)話題思路解讀和高分范文賞析：planning for your leisure time

　　Planning or not planning for your leisure time?

　　Some people prefer to plan activities for their free time very carefully. Others choose not to make any plans at all for their free time. Compare the benefits of planning free-time activities with the benefits of not making plans. Which do you prefer — planning or not planning for your leisure time? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your choice.

　　寫作思路展開結(jié)構(gòu)分析

　　傾向于選擇“有計(jì)劃”。因?yàn)椴还茏鍪裁词虑?，多少都?huì)有一些計(jì)劃。至少知道從什么時(shí)候開始，到什么時(shí)候結(jié)束。羅列幾個(gè)實(shí)現(xiàn)計(jì)劃的好處。據(jù)幾個(gè)實(shí)例。使用讓步結(jié)構(gòu)結(jié)尾：盡管確實(shí)有一些過(guò)程完全不需要計(jì)劃，而計(jì)劃也做不到面面俱到(cover all aspects; have every detail thought of -- think of every detail)，但是適當(dāng)?shù)挠?jì)劃仍然是必要的。

　　本話題高分范文賞析

　　Some people find it to be a better use of their free time if they plan out all of their activities very carefully. Others enjoy their free time more if they do not make any plans at all. I agree with those in the latter group, and would prefer to not be restricted to a schedule. Above most things, I enjoy living my life spontaneously. If I decide that I want to go away for the weekend, assuming I have money and can take time off work, I will go. I am able to live my life in this manner because I never bind myself to carefully planned schedules. I make the most out of every situation I come across and always enjoy myself. Because of this, there is no need for a schedule. It is much more fun to just wait and see what will happen next, after all, it's a free time. I always enjoy the freedom of an unplanned afternoon. If I need to get errands done, I will find time for them. If I have free time, I want to enjoy it. I do not want to be trying to finish things quickly just because there is somewhere else that might be interesting on my list of things to do. If I am at a park and am really enjoying myself, there is no reason why I should leave, even if there is something else to do on my list that sounds interesting. I believe in living in the moment. What I am doing at the present moment is more important than anything I might do in the future. If, on a rare occasion, I do make a schedule, I find that it quickly runs off track. Perhaps I am just particularly bad at keeping to a schedule, but I find that some things take longer to do than I expected they would, and other things are finished in much shorter a time than expected. This quickly makes even the best schedule go awry.