托福獨(dú)立寫作難點(diǎn)話題思路解讀和高分范文賞析：choose your transportation

　　What kind of transportation you would choose?

　　You need to travel from your home to a place 40 miles (64 kilometers) away. Compare the different kinds of transportation you could use. Tell which method of travel you would choose. Give specific reasons for your choice.

　　寫作思路展開結(jié)構(gòu)分析

　　這道題目雖然沒有提供具體選項(xiàng)，但一般來說交通方式就是那么幾種，所以大家可以根據(jù)自己的寫法思路來展開。這里有個(gè)比較常識(shí)的陷阱在里面，就是飛機(jī)這種交通方式，不建議考生選飛機(jī)，因?yàn)轭}目里已經(jīng)說了是64公里，為了64公里的路而乘坐飛機(jī)有點(diǎn)ridiculous。大家可以比較火車(train)、汽車(automobile; car)和自行車(bicycle)等方式。小編認(rèn)為選擇bicycle可能更容易寫一些。

　　本話題高分范文賞析

　　If I need to travel to a place 40 miles away from my home, there are a number of different modes of transport I could utilize, namely, I could take the bus, a car, or the train. The bus is a good choice as the bus system in Beijing has been well-developed. It is possible for me to travel almost anywhere within 40 miles of my house by bus. While on the bus, I can read a book, or relax, assuming it is not too full. The problem with taking the bus, however, is that it is often crowded. It is often uncomfortable, especially during hot summer days. Taking a car is an excellent option, assuming one can afford a car. Cars are notoriously expensive in China, and most people do not have this luxury. However, if it is available, a car is very convenient. You can travel to the exact desired location in record time. A car, especially a personal car, is never crowded. You never have to share space with anyone. However, one cannot relax while driving a car. There is no opportunity to just take in the sights, or read a book. One must always be focused on the road. The train, or the subway, is another option. If the location I am traveling to is on the subway line, then this option is by far the best. While trains can be congested, they are the fastest method of traveling. Subway trains are never subject to traffic jams, as they usually run underground. However, the subway system in Beijing does not go everywhere that I need to. Often, if I take the subway, I then have to either walk for 20 minutes, or take a bus. Overall, I think that the car is the best option, if it is available. The car is convenient and comfortable. However, the bus and the train are both good options if a car is not available.