托福獨(dú)立寫作難點(diǎn)話題思路解讀和高分范文賞析：how to choose a job

　　Choosing a job: high-paying with long working hours, or low-paying with short working hours?

　　Which would you choose: a high-paying job with long hours that would give you little time with family and friends or a lower-paying job with shorter hours that would give you more time with family and friends? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details.

　　寫作思路展開(kāi)結(jié)構(gòu)分析

　　沒(méi)有對(duì)錯(cuò)之分，無(wú)論如何選擇只要能自圓其說(shuō)符合邏輯即可。當(dāng)然大家也可以從人生的不同階段有不同選擇的角度來(lái)展開(kāi)論述，比如年輕的時(shí)候vs成家之后，或者剛開(kāi)始工作時(shí)vs積蓄頗豐以后等等。

　　本話題高分范文賞析

　　I am optimistic that through my studies and continued hard work I will be able to find a job that will provide my future family and me with financial security. We should be able to afford the necessities of life, such as a modest home, enough food to nourish us and keep us in good health, as well as education for our children. Hopefully, I will find myself in the fortunate situation where I can decide between a high-paying job with long hours and a lower-paying job with shorter hours. I would choose the job with the lower salary and greater personal time without hesitation, because my family and friends are the most important things in my life.

　　Time is the greatest investment I can make into the relationships with my wife and my children. A marriage is not just a decision one makes but a promise that one keeps. In order to do so one has to be there for the other person and share moments of joy as well as times of difficulty. Nowadays, too many relationships wither away as the partners are unable to work out their problems or bond through meaningful experiences. Personal careers become too important and family time becomes a rare occurrence.

　　The absence of one parent, due to professional career or divorce, can have a very negative effect on a child's development. The child might question his value to father or mother (depending on which one is continually absent) and develop low self-esteem. Without the presence of either or, worse, both parents, the child will be more likely to make bad decisions as he is lacking proper guidance. And there is one point should also be mentioned, i.e. neither expensive toys nor fancy clothes can compensate for this.

　　Lastly, I can derive more pleasure from spending time with my friends than I ever could from driving a sports car or taking luxury vacations. The inner peace and balance that I enjoy from their company are invaluable to me. Also, a million dollars in the bank would be worth nothing if I didn't have the time to enjoy these riches with my friends.