托福寫作高分滿分范文點(diǎn)評(píng)和思路解析：有助兒童成長(zhǎng)的禮物

　　What gift would you give to help a child develop?

　　A gift (such as a camera, a soccer ball, or an animal) can contribute to a child's development. What gift would you give to help a child develop? Why? Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice.

　　寫作思路展開結(jié)構(gòu)分析

　　幫助孩子成長(zhǎng)發(fā)展應(yīng)該送什么禮物?這個(gè)問題其實(shí)問的比較大的，因?yàn)樵诓煌搜劾镌鯓硬攀呛玫陌l(fā)展本來就有很大差異，假如大家沒思路又或是想法太多不知道挑哪個(gè)，小編的建議是干脆采取比較保險(xiǎn)的it depends策略，比如不同年齡的孩子可能需要不同的禮物等等。

　　本話題高分范文賞析

　　Child's development is often supplemented by the gifts they receive from important adults in their life. It is important to choose these gifts carefully, and foster growth in the right areas. If I were to give a gift to a child, it would be the game of chess. Chess offers a number of advantages to a child. Chess builds social skills, it encourages the child to develop the higher functions of the brain, and it is a good hobby. As with most games, chess encourages a child to be social with others. As chess is a two-person game, any time children play the game they will be interacting with others. As chess is a competitive game with a winner and a loser, children will have to learn how to lose gracefully if they hope to keep their chess partners. Building social skills when one is young is very important for future successes throughout one's life. Playing chess is also an excellent way to increase one's thinking abilities. Chess is a game of strategy. When playing chess, a child will build important skills such as pattern recognition, strategic thinking, and analytical thinking. All of these skills are very important, especially when going through school. Many subjects a young person must take in school utilize all of these skills, and working on them early in life can be nothing but beneficial. Finally, chess is an excellent hobby for a young person. Playing chess, or any other time-intensive game, keeps children out of trouble. If they are spending their time working on building their chess strategies, they are not out on the streets causing trouble. Many children develop behavioral problems because of simple boredom. Chess is an excellent remedy for this, as it is fun to spend one's free time. Thus, I think chess is an excellent present to give to a young child. Chess encourages both personality and mental development, which are very important in a child's early years. While many gifts will encourage the maturity of one of these types of development, there are few gifts that foster the development of both.