托福寫作范文賞析：嘗試新鮮事物

　　Some people like to do only what they already do well. Other people prefer to try new things and take risks. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

　　寫作思路展開結(jié)構(gòu)分析

　　討論兩種attitudes各自的好處。然后在不同的情況下，選擇不同的態(tài)度。比如：鍛煉身體有很多種方法，如果我已經(jīng)習(xí)慣了慢跑，只要能夠達(dá)到身體健康的目的，就不必要花時間練習(xí)一些其他的體育項目了。放松的時候可以聽聽音樂——往往是同一首歌或曲子已經(jīng)聽了很多年。但是看電影，卻很難做到重復(fù)看同一個電影幾百遍。

　　本話題高分范文賞析

　　A defining characteristic of people is the degree to which they are willing to break out of their comfort zone. Old habits and well honed skills give great comfort to any individual, but new personal challenges build character and allow one to grow as a person. It was not until very recently that I fully comprehended this. Today, while I still enjoy doing the things I am already good at, I have become increasingly eager to try new things because I have learned the value of new experiences. I have always been a talented athlete, and I still find great comfort on the basketball court and in the swimming pool. These are familiar places where I feel at home. They are also places where I continue to excel. However, not so long ago my older cousin, a person whom I have always looked up to and admired, reminded me that there is nothing wrong with discovering new talents or doing many different things very well. He introduced me to music. For the past sixteen months I have been learning how to play the guitar, and this new experience has been extremely rewarding. Initially, I struggled. My inability to play even the simplest of notes frustrated me, and quite often I thought about giving up. Yet with my teacher's encouragement I continued to make progress. Now my appreciation for music is much more profound than ever before, and my appetite for new experiences is whetted. Together with a couple of classmates I have formed a book club. Every week we get together and discuss a piece of literature. Of course, my friends were hesitant to give this new idea a try at first. Nevertheless, I have convinced them to be risk takers, and now all of us enjoy not only each others' company but also books and stories, which is a completely new experience for all of us. Together we are planning to learn how to dance and to purchasebicycles to explore the area around our hometown. We don't want to limit ourselves to what we know already.