雅思寫作之避免空洞的單詞和詞組

　　1.一些空洞的單詞或詞組根本不能為句子帶來任何相關的或重要的信息，完全可以被刪掉。

　　比如：When all things are considered, young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion。

　　這句話當中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都顯得多余。完全可以去掉。改為：

　　Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents。

　　2.有些空洞和繁瑣的表達方式可以進行替換

　　例如：Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time。

　　“due to the fact that”就是一個很典型的繁瑣的表達方式的例子，可以替換，簡化為下面的表達方式：

　　Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have now。