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托福考試作文范文:高中生是否應該經歷間隔年

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2018年03月23日

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  托福考試作文題目:

  Students should spend at least one year working or traveling before they go to university? Do you agree or disagree? ( 2016年3月13日)

  高中生應該在上大學之前至少工作或者旅行一年,是否認同?

  思路拓展:

  【間隔年之利好】

 ?、?兼職工作可以幫助年輕人積累工作經驗,獲得自我成就感,使他們對于社會有了更加深刻的洞察,為未來的擇業(yè)打下堅實基礎。

  ② 旅行可以開拓視野、豐富知識、結交新友,鍛煉獨立性,這些對于未來的發(fā)展是有利好的。

 ?、?工作和旅行提高了人的社會意識,豐富了人生的閱歷,成熟了人的心態(tài)。

  【間隔年之弊端】

 ?、?很多孩子可能沉迷工作和旅行不再回歸校園,如果這樣,間隔年就失去了它的初衷。

 ?、?青春期是人的求知欲望最強,也是學習能力和記憶力最強的寶貴時期,高中生不應該耽誤一年的時間遠離校園而去打工或是閑逛,否則,學業(yè)就會被耽誤。

 ?、?高中生沒有形成核心競爭力,很難找到工作。即使是找到,也很容易被欺騙和剝削。

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  【首段】背景介紹 + 爭議焦點 + 作家立場

  Such is human nature to explore the unknown and see the outside word,that is why a great many high school graduates are keen on traveling or working for a period of time before attending dream universities. Conflicting ideas clash in determining whether or not it is a wise idea to inspire high school leavers to experience the Grand Tour. As I see it, the merits of experiencing the gap year outshine its potential demerits.

  【二段】 間隔年之利好

  The most important educational benefit of taking a year off before starting university life is that traveling exposes young adults to stunning places and exotic cultures. It is one thing for teenagers to read about distant countries, but it is even better to enrich the experience of the world on one’s own. What one learns by associating with strangers and absorbing diverse cultures is something he or she could never acquire in the classrooms. For example,I made many congenial friends by self-travel to Tibet after finishing my schooling. This fantastic journey not only expanded my mind but also alleviated my stress triggered by tight academic study. Feasting my eyes on the stunning landscape really sweetened my life and lifted my spirit.

  【三段】間隔年之利好

  Virtually, youngsters can also become the beneficiaries of working as part-timers too. By that I mean, earning a living has a key role to play in helping one accumulate relevant working experience, train one’s crisis-solving abilities and deepen one’s insight into the society, which will lay a solid foundation for one’s future career ladder. To illustrate, via embarking on part-time jobs, I knew that money doesn’t grow on trees. Then, I studied even harder when coming back to campus.

  【四段】 間隔年之弊端

  Notwithstanding all that, we can never ignore the potential downsides caused by experiencing the gap year. First, the study might be delayed. Some school graduates are too immature to draw on their gap year, so they just waste time during that period and harvest nothing. Even worse, it is highly possible that some youngsters might end up never returning to campus. However,since academic qualification is extremely indispensable to every individual,my concern might seldom happen.

  【尾段】再次亮明觀點 + 總結理由

  In closing, my stand is that to inspire young adults to take a year off before going to college is a two-edged sword. Yet youngsters should be encouraged to challenge themselves. This is one of the best ways to mature their thoughts and chasten their characters.


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