關(guān)于托福寫(xiě)作的10個(gè)核心準(zhǔn)則

　　1. Make the paragraph the unit of composition: one paragraph to each topic

　　不同的段落構(gòu)成文章，每個(gè)段落僅傳遞一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)

　　2. As a rule, begin each paragraph with a topic sentence; end it in conformity with the beginning

　　規(guī)則：每個(gè)段落均以主題句開(kāi)頭，并且首尾呼應(yīng)。

　　A. the topic sentence comes at or near the beginning;

　　主題句前置

　　B. the succeeding sentences explain or establish or develop the statement made in the topic sentence;

　　段落圍繞主題句展開(kāi)，后面的句子對(duì)主題句進(jìn)行展開(kāi)解釋

　　C. the final sentence either emphasizes the thought of the topic sentence or states some important consequence.

　　末尾句或者對(duì)主題句進(jìn)行強(qiáng)調(diào)，或者闡述主題句帶來(lái)的結(jié)果。

　　3. Use the active voice

　　主動(dòng)句永遠(yuǎn)比被動(dòng)句直接有力

　　Eg: There were a great number of dead leaves lying on the ground

　　= Dead leaves covered the ground. (清晰生動(dòng))

　　Eg: The reason that he left college was that his health became impaired.

　　= Failing health compelled him to leave college. (簡(jiǎn)潔有力)

　　Eg: It was not long before he was very sorry that he had said what he had.

　　= He soon repented his words. (簡(jiǎn)潔有力)

　　4. Put statements in positive form

　　以肯定的形式表達(dá)否定的意思, 避免使用平淡、毫無(wú)色彩，猶豫不決和含糊其辭的語(yǔ)言。

　　Eg：He was not very often on time.

　　= He usually came late.

　　Eg: He did not think that studying Latin was much use.

　　= He thought the study of Latin useless.

　　Eg: The taming of the Shrew is rather weak in spots. Shakespeare does not portray Katharine as a very admirable character, nor does Bianca remain long in memory as an important character in Shakespeare’s works.

　　= The women in The Taming of the Shrew are unattractive. Katharine is disagreeable, Bianca insignificant.

　　5. Omit needless words

　　刪除冗詞

　　Vigorous writing is concise. A sentence should contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary parts. This requires not that the writer make all his sentences short, or that he avoid all detail and treat his subjects only in outline, but that every word tell.

　　有力的寫(xiě)作一定簡(jiǎn)潔。

　　Owing to the fact that

　　=Since (because)

　　In spite of the fact that

　　=Though (although)

　　Call your attention to the fact that

　　=Remind you (notify you)

　　The fact that he had not succeeded

　　=His failure

　　6. Avoid a succession of loose sentences

　　別寫(xiě)流水賬，找找語(yǔ)言的邏輯關(guān)系，通過(guò)who, which, when, where, and while 這些詞把句子串起來(lái)。

　　7. Express co-ordinate ideas in similar form

　　Parallel structure 平行結(jié)構(gòu)講究對(duì)稱(chēng)美：內(nèi)容對(duì)等，結(jié)構(gòu)一致。

　　Eg: Formerly, science was taught by the textbook method, while now the laboratory method is employed.

　　Parallel structure: Formerly, science was taught by the textbook method; now it is taught by the laboratory method.

　　8. Keep related words together

　　詞的位置決定詞的關(guān)系，所以遵循‘物以類(lèi)聚’，意思關(guān)聯(lián)緊密的詞放在一塊。

　　A: 主謂之間不分割，補(bǔ)充信息需前置

　　Eg: Wordsworth, in the fifth book of The Excursion, gives a minute description of this church.

　　Eg: In the fifth book of the Excursion, Wordsworth gives a minute description of this church. (狀語(yǔ)前置，主謂毗鄰)

　　B：關(guān)系代詞緊隨先行詞出現(xiàn)

　　Eg: There was a look in his eye that boded mischief.

　　Eg: In his eye was a look that boded mischief. (名詞look先行，關(guān)系詞that緊隨)

　　9. In summaries, keep to one tense

　　總結(jié)通常使用現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，如果使用過(guò)去時(shí)，請(qǐng)保持時(shí)態(tài)一致。

　　10. Place the emphatic words of a sentence at the end

　　欲擒故縱的圓周句(periodic sentence)中，強(qiáng)調(diào)信息后置。

　　Eg: Four centuries ago, Christopher Columbus, one of the Italian mariners whom the decline of their own republics had put at the service of the world and of adventure, seeking for Spain a westward passage to the Indies as setoff against the achievements of Portuguese discoverers, lighted on America.

　　Eg: With these hopes and in this belief I would urge you, laying aside all hindrance, thrusting away all private aims, to devote yourselves unswervingly and unflinchingly to the vigorous and successful prosecution of this war.