托福寫作語(yǔ)言實(shí)例解析

　　Some people think that students should be encouraged to study those fields such as science, technology, engineering and mathematics rather than they have interest in. Do you agree or disagree?有人認(rèn)為學(xué)生們應(yīng)該學(xué)習(xí)科技，工程學(xué)，數(shù)學(xué)，而不是他們感興趣的課程，你是否認(rèn)同這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)?(2016年11月5日)

　　相關(guān)題目

　　It is more important to choose to study a subject that interests you than a subject preparing you better for a job or career. Do you agree or disagree?學(xué)習(xí)感興趣的課程比學(xué)習(xí)有助于就業(yè)的課程更加重要，你是否同意這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)?( 2006年11月19日)

　　Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 有人認(rèn)為學(xué)生們應(yīng)該學(xué)習(xí)他們感興趣的科目，有人認(rèn)為學(xué)生們應(yīng)該學(xué)習(xí)對(duì)于未來(lái)有用的課程，討論兩種觀點(diǎn)，談及你的立場(chǎng)。

　　頭腦風(fēng)暴

　　路遙在《人生》中寫道："人生的道路雖然漫長(zhǎng)，但緊要處常常只有幾步，特別是當(dāng)人年輕的時(shí)候。"每一種選擇都是一種取舍，人人都想隨心而活，活出精彩。但是，有時(shí)候我們?cè)诰芙^之前，要先向現(xiàn)實(shí)妥協(xié)，這就是為何很多大學(xué)生不得不放棄自己心愛(ài)的專業(yè)，而選擇一個(gè)便于就業(yè)的，有前程的專業(yè)。

　　是選擇便于就業(yè)的法律、會(huì)計(jì)還是心愛(ài)的中文、英語(yǔ)，小編也曾青春迷茫。但是，選你所愛(ài)，愛(ài)你所選，才能青春無(wú)悔，人生幸福。

　　寫作立場(chǎng)

　　和選擇實(shí)用性的課程相比，我更鼓勵(lì)童靴們學(xué)習(xí)自己喜愛(ài)的課程。

　　思路拓展

　　為何學(xué)習(xí)感興趣的課程

　　興趣是最好的老師，學(xué)習(xí)感興趣的課程可以激發(fā)學(xué)習(xí)熱情，開(kāi)發(fā)一個(gè)人無(wú)限的潛能。

　　若非學(xué)習(xí)感興趣的課程，即使一個(gè)人找到一份賺錢的工作，也容易產(chǎn)生職業(yè)倦怠。

　　如果能把個(gè)人興趣和職業(yè)理想完美結(jié)合，這是一種人生的成功。

　　為何學(xué)習(xí)實(shí)用性的課程

　　教育是一種投資，每一個(gè)投資者渴望獲得高額回報(bào)，即一份穩(wěn)定高薪有前途的事業(yè)，以擇業(yè)為導(dǎo)向的課程更容易幫助人實(shí)現(xiàn)這個(gè)目標(biāo)?！　?/p>

　　范文賞析

　　首段：背景介紹 + 爭(zhēng)議焦點(diǎn) + 寫作立場(chǎng)

　　Education is one of the key words of our time, however, people's views differ greatly as to which should be the superior option of academic pursuit, to opt for courses conducing to future career or to focus on subjects that interest them. As I see it, compared with choosing subjects that can help young adults ready themselves for career challenges, to deliberately specialize in one's favorite courses is more commendable.

　　二段：反駁段：學(xué)習(xí)感興趣的課程的利好

　　Opting for the courses in which one takes considerable interest will enjoy more visible merits. First, one's study motivation can be highly stimulated provided that one can choose subjects exerting a peculiar fascination on him or her. Conversely, people might generate career burnout even if they might get profit-making jobs.

　　三段：反駁段：學(xué)習(xí)感興趣的課程的利好

　　Also, taking one's favorite subjects can fully tap his or her infinite potentials. Meanwhile, one can fully enjoy the process of learning and career life. Apart from that, it is also a sort of success if one can perfectly combine specialized knowledge with career ambition. Therefore, college students have sound reasons to select the courses that interest them.

　　四段：讓步段：學(xué)習(xí)實(shí)用性課程的利好

　　Indeed, I have to concede that the acquisition of pragmatic courses might still have some benefits. Sure enough, job-related courses will help one outshine many candidates and successfully secure a decent job. That is why some people feel that education is a kind of investment and competitive courses such as engineering, science and technology can, in most cases, earn high interests. Thereby, what some people are concerned about is whether the course of their choice can lead to a profitable career. After all, career-related subjects can lay a solid foundation for climbing the career ladder.

　　尾段：亮明觀點(diǎn) + (總結(jié)理由)

　　In closing, I re-affirm my conviction that even though choosing utilitarian subjects is never without merit, university students should still be encouraged to choose their favorite areas of study.

　　變通表達(dá)

　　1.course = subject n.課程

　　2.career-oriented course = career-oriented subjects 以就業(yè)為導(dǎo)向的課程

　　3.take considerable interest in … = take keen interest in … 對(duì)于……很感興趣

　　4.secure a decent job = get a decent career 找到一份體面的工作

　　句法語(yǔ)料

　　1.conduce to … 有助于……

　　2.sure enough 的確

　　3.enjoy more visible merits 有更多的明顯的利好

　　4.to do sth. is more commendable 去做某事更加值得推薦

　　5.to do sth. deserves more recommendations 去做某事更加值得推薦

　　短語(yǔ)語(yǔ)料

　　1.ready themselves for career challenges 使他們?yōu)槲磥?lái)的事業(yè)挑戰(zhàn)做好準(zhǔn)備

　　2.exert a peculiar fascination on sb. 對(duì)于某人極其有吸引力

　　3.might generate career burnout 也許會(huì)產(chǎn)生職業(yè)倦怠

　　4.fully tap one's infinite potentials 充分地開(kāi)發(fā)一個(gè)人的無(wú)限潛能

　　5.combine specialized knowledge with career ambition 把專業(yè)知識(shí)和職業(yè)夢(mèng)想結(jié)合起來(lái)

　　6.choose utilitarian subjects 選擇實(shí)用性的課程

　　7.choose their favorite areas of study 選擇他們喜歡的學(xué)習(xí)領(lǐng)域

　　8.outshine many candidates 勝過(guò)很多的候選人

　　9.lead to a profitable career 帶來(lái)一個(gè)有利可圖的事業(yè)

　　10.can lay a solid foundation for climbing the career ladder 可以為攀登事業(yè)的階梯打下堅(jiān)實(shí)的基礎(chǔ)。