怎么讓托福寫作更加完美？

　　學(xué)生們寫的托福作文里或多或少都會有一些用詞不當(dāng)?shù)膯栴}，但是要注意的是一些最最基本的錯誤是不能犯的。

　　拼寫錯誤

　　這里的拼寫錯誤不是指在考試時候的誤打，而是本身對詞匯拼寫記憶的錯誤。

　　亂用大詞

　　表達(dá)中式

　　表意重復(fù)

　　?They shocked their friends， devastated their families， crushed their best friends.

　　前面已經(jīng)提到了朋友，后面又提到朋友。

　　? The show is so compelling but attractive.

　　?compelling和attractive是同義詞，所以這里這么寫就讓人不明白。

　　固定用法錯誤

　　? To some extends， I agree with the author’s general assertion that if parents

　　also have a comprehensive sense of professional knowledge.

　　——To some extends應(yīng)改為To some extent

　　例證夸張

　　? For example， when a doctor faces a patient who has got cancer， the doctor

　　cannot tell the truth， for the truth may cause the patient’s immediate death.

　　雖然善意的謊言是必要的，但是其功效顯然沒有這么大。

　　成分多余

　　? According to a comprehensive investigation which is carried out by Chinese

　　Academy of Social Sciences shows that there is an increase in the number of

　　university students who are taking part-time jobs.

　　該句中的shows that是多余的成分。

　　詞性混亂

　　? However， the questions such as "Have you ever regretted marrying your

　　husband" may be very privacy and embarrassingly.

　　句子中的privacy和embarrassingly應(yīng)該改成private和embarrassing。

　　時態(tài)錯誤

　　托福作文一般使用現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，除了拿過去事件作為例子用過去時態(tài)。

　　? Some people claimed that news media has enormous influence and is a detrimental creation.

　　—— claimed應(yīng)該改為claim

　　希望上面的常見的托福作文備考扣分點可以幫助大家提高托福寫作成績，取得優(yōu)異的成績，聽力課堂預(yù)祝各位考試順利，早日結(jié)束考試。