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托福獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作中的自問(wèn)自答

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  很多考生認(rèn)為獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作不容易寫(xiě),主要原因是因?yàn)闆](méi)有想法或語(yǔ)言不好表達(dá)。其實(shí),思路和表達(dá)是由邏輯決定的。而所有文章的邏輯都可以通過(guò)一種“自問(wèn)自答”的方式展開(kāi)。這樣,你的思路如同行云流水一般流暢,而你的語(yǔ)言也會(huì)隨著思路從容地表達(dá)出來(lái)。

  下面以2011年05月13日北美新托福獨(dú)立寫(xiě)作真題為例,題目為:

  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

  It is better for parents to encourage their children to take a part-time job.

  Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

  題目:父母該不該鼓勵(lì)孩子做兼職工作?

  破題思路:

  1)問(wèn):不做兼職會(huì)怎樣?答:有可能無(wú)所事事而招惹麻煩,受到周?chē)说挠绊懻慈旧蠅牧?xí)性。

  2)問(wèn):做兼職會(huì)怎樣?答:學(xué)會(huì)管理時(shí)間、培養(yǎng)責(zé)任心、珍惜閑暇時(shí)光和辛苦賺到的錢(qián)(全文中心論點(diǎn))。

  因此,開(kāi)頭可以這樣展開(kāi)。

  第一句,不做兼職可能會(huì)怎樣:

  Children with too much free time are more likely to get themselves in trouble because teenagers tend to develop bad behavior from the influence of their friends and peers.

  第二句,還是做兼職好(引出中心論點(diǎn)):

  I think that a parent should encourage his or her children to do a part-time job to instill in them the value of time management, a sense of personal responsibility, and also to help them to learn the value of money.

  中間段落的邏輯展開(kāi)也可以如法炮制,如Paragraph 1:

  問(wèn):做兼職有何好處?答:學(xué)會(huì)管理時(shí)間(本段論點(diǎn))。

  While a part-time job sometimes conflicts with studies, this experience can help young people acquire important time management skills that will help them succeed in college.

  問(wèn):具體而言,管理時(shí)間有何意義?答:拖延時(shí)間會(huì)拉低學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)(舉例論證)。

  If students begin learning to manage a tight schedule in high school, they will soon understand that procrastination can be detrimental to their grade point average.

  得出結(jié)論,點(diǎn)題:

  A part-time job makes them block off more time each day for work, school and homework.

  反問(wèn):如果不做兼職可能會(huì)怎樣?答:時(shí)間觀念差(再次強(qiáng)調(diào)論點(diǎn))。

  Without a part-time job, their schedules are more likely to be unstructured.

  后面的段落與之相仿,也是通過(guò)自問(wèn)自答將行文邏輯展開(kāi),層層遞進(jìn)、環(huán)環(huán)相扣。這樣的文章思路清晰、邏輯嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)、可操作性強(qiáng),便于模仿和記憶


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