2017年12月四級考試寫作解析（南京新東方）

這是繼2016年12月后再一次考開放式話題，所以大家對這種題型并不陌生，話題涉及的也是社會熱點問題?？赡軙幸徊糠滞瑢W(xué)不認(rèn)識patient這個詞，但是絕大多數(shù)同學(xué)都應(yīng)該能夠根據(jù)doctors猜出patients的意思，relationship也是常見的詞，歷年四級已考過網(wǎng)絡(luò)與人們生活方式的關(guān)系，手機與生活的關(guān)系等，所以學(xué)生也能認(rèn)識該詞，應(yīng)該能把握“醫(yī)患關(guān)系”這一主題。

文章框架：開頭第一段話題引起，說明“醫(yī)患關(guān)系”這一話題引起了關(guān)注，然后可以提一下這一話題引起大家重視的原因，能想到由于一些醫(yī)療事故的發(fā)生、個別醫(yī)生的不負(fù)責(zé)任，醫(yī)生和病人之間的信任關(guān)系出現(xiàn)了危機。接下來第二段主要分析如何解決問題。這是一道有關(guān) “how”的話題，所以可以按照課堂所講，將建議措施部分展開分析，所以想到社會問題首先可以找政府;其次，醫(yī)院、醫(yī)生也應(yīng)該通過提高醫(yī)生的職業(yè)素質(zhì)、責(zé)任心來重建信任;最后，醫(yī)生和病人兩者之間的溝通交流也可以緩和緊張的關(guān)系。最后一段總結(jié)，強調(diào)和諧的醫(yī)患關(guān)系很重要，多方努力共同促進和諧的醫(yī)患關(guān)系。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on how to best handle the relationship between doctors and patients. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

范文：

Nowadays, the relationship between doctors and patients has aroused controversy among the public. The conflicts in doctor-patient relationship can be seen and heard everywhere due to some accidents caused by doctors’ carelessness or poor medical service.

In order to relieve the tension between doctors and patients, there are several solutions as follows. First, it is high time that the government should provide more financial support for the advancement of medical technology. Second, it is necessary that the hospitals create a positive hospital image of medical service by enhancing doctors’ occupational qualities and their sense of responsibility, so that trust can be rebuilt in the doctor-patient relationship. Third, communication between doctors and patients should be strengthened to ensure that patients better learn their sickness, way of treatment and rehabilitation.

A harmonious doctor-patient relationship is of great importance in the construction of a harmonious society. Joint efforts by the both sides and the support of the society will make a positive change.