2015年6月英語(yǔ)四級(jí)真題作文及范文：母女對(duì)話（網(wǎng)友版2）

As is graphically depicted in the cartoon, a young girl is talking with her mother. She says ironically, “Good news mom! I was accepted to the college of your choice!” Then, her mother smiles and seems content with this result. Apparently, the cartoon aims to reveal the fact that a majority of modern parents play an increasingly negative role in their children’s growth.

　　第一段三句話，描寫(xiě)圖中大體現(xiàn)象、細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)對(duì)話內(nèi)容和人物反應(yīng)、揭示圖畫(huà)的目的。

　　There are several possible reasons accountable for this phenomenon(中心句). To begin with, family in growing numbers has only one child; therefore, parents oftentimes focus all their attentions on that child and exert much pressure on him or her(原因一). Moreover, numerous parents intend to realize their unfulfilled dreams by letting their children learn what they failed to learn and apply for the college by which they failed to be accepted, because they have become richer and they believe that they have the power to make what they wanted and want come true now(原因二). For instance, my uncle used to be a poor man and his dream that one day he would become a violinist was broken because of lack of money. But he made a fortune by selling coals, and then forced his son, my younger brother to practice playing violin. My brother was a huge fan of sports, but now he has to play violin everyday unwillingly and ofter quarrels with their parents(舉例：原來(lái)-然后-結(jié)局).

　　To sum up, it is unreasonable for parents to control their children’s life(總結(jié)句). In order to help them grow happily and healthily, parents are supposed to communicate with their kids about what they are really interested in(建議一，目的句型). Meanwhile, it is about time that parents let their kids make their own choices(建議二，“是時(shí)候”句型). Only in these ways will children grow in a psychologically happy environment and realize their own dreams.