My most impressive friends
我印象最深刻的朋友
【名師簡(jiǎn)評(píng)】
2014年12月20日
四級(jí)真題，寫(xiě)作部分延續(xù)了2014年6月14日
四級(jí)寫(xiě)作的出題風(fēng)格，具有以下四大大特點(diǎn)：
1.反押題：
此次作文，依舊沒(méi)有考察“熱點(diǎn)”的“環(huán)境、文化、網(wǎng)絡(luò)”等大話題，而是“平民草根、接地氣”;
2.易審題：
依舊沒(méi)有考察考生“審題能力”以及“跑題偏題”的可能性，作文的主題非常開(kāi)放而明顯，所有考生都有話好說(shuō);
3.重語(yǔ)言：
主題明確，不會(huì)跑題，考生比拼的就是“語(yǔ)言質(zhì)量”本身了。一篇不再“假大空”的文章，注定不需要使用太多“大而華麗的空洞語(yǔ)言、口號(hào)語(yǔ)言”，而在于考生能否靈活運(yùn)用一些基礎(chǔ)詞匯和固定表達(dá)，寫(xiě)出語(yǔ)法正確、語(yǔ)言流暢的文章。
4.技巧和能力并重：
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六級(jí)課堂所倡導(dǎo)的“寫(xiě)作技巧與范文背誦”作文備考思路依舊得到體現(xiàn)和應(yīng)用?？忌纫?guī)律性總結(jié)歷年真題出題的特點(diǎn)，又要勤加背誦和練習(xí)考前的范文。宗旨，多背，多寫(xiě)，背好，寫(xiě)好，總能夠在考場(chǎng)上有話好說(shuō)，有分可拿!
【參考范文】
I have met so many friends in my college life. They have exerted enormous influence on my life. However, one of my most impressive friends is my roommate, Li Ming. In the class meeting on the first day of school, Li Ming did not impress us at all. We started to notice him because he was always late for classes.
We were thus impressed by his laziness. I came to know him and his situation because we were roommates and spent much time together: his mother was seriously ill and sick abed in long-term, his father left him and his mother mercilessly. Hence, it was him that shouldered the heavy burden of taking care of his sick mothersupporting the whole family.Finally, under great pressures, he balanced his life and study perfectly: he was no longer always late, took good care of his mother and even won the scholarship many years in a row. The experience of Li Ming can be one of the most convincing cases of the power of persistence and will. He left a deep impression and imposed a durable influence on me.
Indeed, friend such as him can be regarded as asset and property in our life. We have rights to choose our own friends，but we should also be prudent and sensible enough to choose friends who can bring us “positive energy”. (228 words)
