2013年6月英語四級作文范文標(biāo)準(zhǔn)版點(diǎn)評（滬江網(wǎng)校版）

作文標(biāo)準(zhǔn)版點(diǎn)評

The importance of doing small things

From the carton, we can clearly see that the boy is worried about disposing of nuclear waste, while his father tells him to empty the dustbin first. This carton reminds me of a Chinese saying:If you don't clean the room(solve your problems), then how can you control the world. However, most people always attach great importance to something big, but neglect small things.

In my opinion, it is necessary and important to do small things. On the one hand, doing small things well helps us to develop good habits, which set a good foundation for our future development. There is no doubt that one of the greatest differences between success and failure is the importance placed on little things. On the other hand, the big is the little. If something needs to be done, it is big. No matter what kinds of task, if it is worth doing, it can be big.

Taking all these into account, we can easily notice that it is reasonable to do small things before big ones. So before doing important things, let’s empty our dustbin first!

【點(diǎn)評】

本次四級作文是一篇圖畫作文，大家對于這樣的作文形式應(yīng)該不會陌生吧，歷年考題中也曾出現(xiàn)過類似題型，所以這也算老生常談了。

圖畫作文題目怎么寫呢?首先要確立文章的基本思想，這是最重要的。我們要確定圖畫給我們傳達(dá)的是一個什么樣的信息。本次作文的重點(diǎn)就在這一句話”the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big”。從圖畫中男孩與父親的對話中我們基本可以判斷出出題人的初衷是想說在做大事情之前要先做好小事情，正好對應(yīng)了中國的一句諺語：一屋不掃何以掃天下。基本思想確立以后我們就可以按套路出牌了。

第一段， 我們首先用一兩句話對圖片做一個簡潔的描述，然后總體陳述大多數(shù)人的做法;

第二段， 第二段總起句表明自己的觀點(diǎn)，觀點(diǎn)一定要陳述清楚，不能含糊。說明doing small things 非常重要，然后就這一觀點(diǎn)分別詳述原因，one the one hand,… one the other hand…;

第三段， 總結(jié)，一句話概括剛才所支持的觀點(diǎn)或原因，最后一句話考生可以照應(yīng)開篇，也可以表決心，比如I decide to …..。

總之無論四級作文怎么樣都逃脫不了我們的模：找出觀點(diǎn)，詳述原因，總結(jié)概括，最后預(yù)祝同學(xué)們考出一個好成績!