2011年6月英語四級真題作文范文(滬江網(wǎng)校高分版)

My views on Online Shopping

1. 現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)購已經(jīng)成為一種時尚
2. 網(wǎng)上購物有很多好處，但也有不少問題
3. 我的建議

In nowadays, can we find a person who has not experienced online shopping? Definitely not. Online shopping is coming into fashion in most of cities due to the rapid development of internet technology.

Online shopping is welcomed by most people due to various reasons. From the perspective of consumer, it can save some time for people who don’t have much spare time. Just click the mouse, they can get whatever they want while staying at home. For the retailers, it can cut some costs for those who don’t have much circulating funds. They don’t have to rent a house and spend money on employees compared with the traditional trade mode. However, there are still some defects in online shopping. First, face to face deal makes online shopping less reliable and trustworthy. Second, people will lose the fun of bargain.

It is undeniable that shopping on the internet has become an irresistible trend in modern society. It’s of great urgency that we need to regulate the relative laws in accordance with the rapid growth of online shopping. Only in this way can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience of online shopping without the concern of being treated.

點評：本次四級作文探討的是最近的熱點話題之一——互聯(lián)網(wǎng)網(wǎng)購。目前網(wǎng)購的風靡程度是眾所周知，因此，考生對于該話題還是比較熟悉的。但是，比較特殊的是，題干所列出的要求的是考生從一個客觀的角度來闡述該話題，而不是簡單陳述自己的意見。所以，考生應當審清楚題，在寫作時不僅僅要列出網(wǎng)購的優(yōu)點，還必須給出相應的缺點。

按照四級作文的要求，考生在第一段時應該總述現(xiàn)象并引出話題；

第二段考生應當從正反兩方面來論述網(wǎng)購，分別鋪陳其優(yōu)缺點；關(guān)于優(yōu)點，網(wǎng)購的優(yōu)點很多，考生可擇其最突出顯著的方面來闡述，比如說網(wǎng)購可以節(jié)省很多時間；網(wǎng)購可以節(jié)省很多成本開支等；其次，缺點方面考生可以把重心放在誠信方面；為了不至于跟優(yōu)點相比，缺點方面太輕，考生可以考慮稍微提一下其他缺點，比如說與傳統(tǒng)購物相比，網(wǎng)購少去了很多砍價的樂趣；

第三點要求考生對于第二段列出的缺點給出自己的建議。此處我們可以根據(jù)第二段列出的缺點方面給出相應的防范應對措施。
整篇作文話題比較好展開，難度不大，只要考生審好題，列出相應點，相信作文不會是難題。