It's Our Duty To Protect Our Environment
保護(hù)環(huán)境是我們的義務(wù)
It's our duty to protect our environment. Where do we live? The earth. The earth is the only one place we live in. So you know how important the environment is.
保護(hù)環(huán)境是我們的義務(wù)。我們居住在哪里?地球。地球是我們唯一居住的地方,所以可想而知環(huán)境對(duì)于我們的重要性。
But now, some people are harming the environment, like cutting down trees, drawing pictures on public walls, littering onto the ground. It's terrible if we still do it.
但是現(xiàn)在,很多人都在破壞環(huán)境,比如砍伐樹木,在公共墻壁上亂涂亂畫,隨地扔垃圾。如果我們繼續(xù)這樣下去是非??膳碌?。
Now, it's time for all the people in the society to protect the environment. It's our duty. It needs each of us to make a contribution to improving the environment. We should make our environment more and more beautiful.
現(xiàn)在,是人們保護(hù)環(huán)境的時(shí)候了,這是我們的義務(wù),我們都要為改善環(huán)境做貢獻(xiàn),我們應(yīng)該努力讓我們的環(huán)境變得更好。
點(diǎn)評(píng):作者多用學(xué)過的詞語,不但保證了正確,還鞏固了所學(xué)的知識(shí),并且注意句型的多樣化,如長句、短句、疑問句,使用了“if,so,now,but”等詞,整篇文章讀起來朗朗上口。實(shí)際上,寫文章就像串珠子,連接詞就在于把一個(gè)個(gè)單詞串起來。
議論文常用的句型有:
1、論點(diǎn):
Computer is important.
We must learn English well.
It's very important for us to...
In my opinion...
2、論證過程常用一些銜接詞可使文章讀起來流暢、緊湊。如:
Firstly, ... Secondly, ... Lastly, ... Above all, ... 等。
3、結(jié)尾強(qiáng)調(diào)觀點(diǎn),最好用不同的句型來表達(dá)相同的觀點(diǎn),如:
So we must...
So it's very important for us to...
I believe...
We should...