雅思小作文解析及范文:油價(jià)的變化

　　Task：Price in US dollars of a barrel of oil from 1995 to 2015.

　　思路解析：

　　1. 分段原則為：每條線一段，如果多于三條線，則趨勢(shì)相似的分為一段。

　　2. 開頭段需要改寫題目，且進(jìn)行總體趨勢(shì)描述。

　　3. 按照時(shí)間軸的推進(jìn)順序進(jìn)行描述。

　　4. 一類數(shù)據(jù)(Max, Min, 交點(diǎn))需要重點(diǎn)描述，、。

　　5. 注意句式的多樣性，如在表達(dá)改變的過(guò)程中，下文采用了名詞和動(dòng)詞的交替使用。

　　6. 注意靈活的使用近義詞進(jìn)行詞匯替換。

　　參考范文：

　　The graph shows oil prices in dollars per barrel from 1995 with forecasts to 2015. Overall, oil prices increased by nearly four hundred percent from 1995 to 2008, with the most dramatic increase in the two years from 2006 to 2008. This rise is predicted to continue into the future.(開頭段改寫題目，并且描述總體趨勢(shì))

　　Prices started at around twenty US dollars a barrel during 1995, and then rose slightly to approximately twenty-four dollars in 1998. (起點(diǎn)+動(dòng)作1，注意動(dòng)作+幅度)

　　The cost of a barrel then dropped for two years, to the lowest point of about eighteen dollars during 2000. (Min, 一類數(shù)據(jù)必描述，注意數(shù)據(jù)雙重性，同時(shí)注意cost=price，同替換義)After that, there was a steady price rise, reaching about fifty dollars a barrel in 2006. (there be 句式，名詞化表達(dá)，句式多樣性)

　　This was followed by a dramatic climb to over ninety dollars in 2008, and it is forecasted that this rise will continue into the future, and will level off slightly after 2010, with expectedly ending up at 130 price by 2015. (follow by 句式，名詞化表達(dá)，注意描述數(shù)據(jù)的將來(lái)式應(yīng)該用forecast, expect等表預(yù)測(cè)的詞匯，結(jié)尾用end up)

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