雅思作文高分例文之城市發(fā)展類詳解

　　有幾百年歷史的城鎮(zhèn),似乎距離我們很遙遠(yuǎn),但是仔細(xì)一想你腳下的這片熱土早已飽經(jīng)風(fēng)霜,只是你沒有意識到而已。本次考題的難度較為有限,首先城市發(fā)展與規(guī)劃方面的話題算是較為常見。同時本題的提問方式是非常簡單的雙提問的報告方式。因此對于有一定備考經(jīng)歷的考生而言，此題應(yīng)該不會給大家造成什么障礙。

　　例題如下:重慶環(huán)球雅思

　　There are many towns and cities designed and

　　constructed in previous centuries, and they are suitable for those times. What

　　problems are caused by this today? And how to solve these problems?

　　Visiting ancient towns and cities is seemingly thought as an significant part of people’s

　　traveling plans, whereas talking about settling down there people surely will

　　begin to doubt whether living there is possible and whether comfortable or not.

　　開頭段還是一如既往地介紹背景和點題,由于本題的提問方式和以往的辯論型問題不同, 因此本段的點題也略有變化.

　　這類報告文章,通常情況下在開頭段不會清晰闡述筆者的立場。

　　Eventually, residents in old towns and cities built and planned

　　long time ago are confronted with quite a number of problems. To begin with, narrow streets

　　there were designed before modern transports’ popularity, leading to the fact

　　that an efficient public transport system cannot be applied. In addition, pipelines for

　　natural gas and heating system, two considerably important social services for

　　modern lifestyle, cannot be in harmony with constructions built hundreds of

　　years ago. Metropolis in history are usually horizontal ones without any

　　high-rise buildings, and thus relatively smaller population is able to be

　　accommodated there, which is absolutely against urbanization regarded as main

　　task for most of governments worldwide.

　　本段內(nèi)容只針對問題一。用排比的形式提出了現(xiàn)如今居住在古城里面的居民正在面臨什么問題。本段羅列了三個主要問題,在真實考試中為了篇幅的控制通常兩個問題即可滿足篇幅要求.

　　It seems easy that governments can utilize modern technology to modify old towns and

　　cities for providing local people with much more comfortable living conditions.

　　Rebuilding like this, nevertheless, definitely ruins what our ancestors left us.

　　Instead, governments should make every effort to preserve old towns and cities,

　　and strictly control the population of who are willing to accept ancient

　　lifestyle and settle down there. Adjacent to old towns and cities, modern cities

　　should be planned by governments where residents can share more social resource

　　and enjoy more convenience brought by usage of high-tech in our daily life. Only

　　by this way, can those cultural heritages be protected perfectly.

　　自然而然地,

　　本段重點回答題干的第二個問題,既解決方案。只不過在觀點方面, 筆者堅持了新城市的建設(shè)才是解決問題的關(guān)鍵。而任何對于古城的改造都是破壞。

　　Reforming old towns and cities with a couple of hundred years' history is completely an

　　unwise decision. Meanwhile, as for who like to enjoy a modern, comfortable and

　　convenient lifestyle, moving out of old places seems like the only solution.