中國(guó)學(xué)生缺乏創(chuàng)造思維 雅思寫作高分長(zhǎng)難句加分

　　其實(shí)，對(duì)于寫作論點(diǎn)方面，中國(guó)的學(xué)生普遍缺乏creative thinking，因此在邏輯微有瑕疵的前提下，如何拿到6.5或者7以上的高分呢?這就來(lái)源于你的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu) grammer range and accuarcy，如何寫好complex structure。也就引出我們今天的主題：

　　正確用長(zhǎng)難句給大作文加分

　　1，長(zhǎng)難句會(huì)加分么?

　　高分的寫作要求我們有語(yǔ)法的豐富度，也就是時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)氣與語(yǔ)態(tài)的結(jié)合，除此之外還要有多變的句式結(jié)構(gòu)(復(fù)雜句加簡(jiǎn)單句)

　　其中，復(fù)雜句是最能考驗(yàn)一個(gè)學(xué)生語(yǔ)言功底的句子，正確的架構(gòu)一個(gè)長(zhǎng)難句對(duì)于考官來(lái)說(shuō)，無(wú)疑是一個(gè)高分亮點(diǎn)。

　　eg.Many schools are eager to hire experienced employees.(簡(jiǎn)單句)

　　eg.Many schools are eager to hire employees who possess the organisational skills needed tocomplete the duties associated with teaching.(復(fù)雜句)

　　但這并不意味，所有的句子都得由長(zhǎng)難句來(lái)完成，長(zhǎng)難句是起到畫龍點(diǎn)睛之筆，偶爾也需要短句來(lái)調(diào)節(jié)考官的閱讀節(jié)奏。(要注意所有論點(diǎn)的提出只能用簡(jiǎn)單句)

　　因此，可以負(fù)責(zé)任的說(shuō)，長(zhǎng)難句的存在對(duì)于作文分?jǐn)?shù)的提高有著至關(guān)重要的作用。

　　2，長(zhǎng)難句分為哪幾種?

　　是不是字?jǐn)?shù)多就是長(zhǎng)難句啊?

　　我是不是要把主語(yǔ)的頭弄大一點(diǎn)

　　萬(wàn)一寫個(gè)長(zhǎng)難句還有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，還不如不寫了

　　沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，全寫小短句我也可以拿高分吧嘿嘿

　　我敢肯定很多烤鴨都有以上掩耳盜鈴或者天真可愛(ài)的想法。但在這里需要指出的是，長(zhǎng)難句區(qū)別于簡(jiǎn)單句，即要有復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)，而不僅僅是字?jǐn)?shù)的限制。

　　所謂英文的復(fù)雜句，從本質(zhì)上來(lái)說(shuō)不過(guò)就是兩個(gè)(或者兩個(gè)以上)簡(jiǎn)單句和連詞的疊加。

　　基礎(chǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)為：

　　(連接詞)+主+謂+賓+(連接詞)+主+謂+(賓)

　　當(dāng)然亦可以通過(guò)“嵌套”出更為復(fù)雜的復(fù)雜句，但一般高分作文的復(fù)雜句只含有一個(gè)主句和1~2個(gè)從句及少量短語(yǔ)，再輔以簡(jiǎn)單句和并列句。

　　Take it easy,我們并沒(méi)有變態(tài)到到讓你寫出3、4個(gè)從句的長(zhǎng)難句。

　　細(xì)分一下長(zhǎng)難句的種類，可以主要分為以下幾種

　　1.主句+從句

　　例如：Some citizens take it for granted that environmental problems should be resolved by government alone without any personal effort.(用it作為形式賓語(yǔ)的賓語(yǔ)從句)

　　2.倒裝，強(qiáng)調(diào)或者虛擬

　　例如：(1)Strange as I may seem,parent's attention sometimes hinder student's academic performance in school.(倒裝)

　　(2)It is the interaction of the two that shapes a person's personality and dictates how that personality develops.(強(qiáng)調(diào))

　　(3)If sufficient sky train and underground train systems were built and effectively maintained in our major cities,then traffic on the roads would be dramatically reduced.(虛擬)

　　3.長(zhǎng)句加短語(yǔ)的結(jié)合

　　例如：Persuading manufacturers and travellers to adopt this new technology would be effective stragegy for improving air quality,especially in cities.(動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ))

　　4.用連詞進(jìn)行列舉

　　例如：Physical activity could be encouraged relatively cheaply,for exampleby installing exercise equipment in parks.

　　3怎么寫出正確的長(zhǎng)難句

　　根據(jù)第二部分給出的長(zhǎng)難句種類，

　　現(xiàn)在我們來(lái)仔細(xì)研究一下句子的主要框架結(jié)構(gòu)。

　　1.主句+從句

　　(1) 賓語(yǔ)從句：someone take it in account(認(rèn)為)

　　someone take it into granted(認(rèn)為什么理所當(dāng)然)

　　it 作為形式賓語(yǔ)(高分用法)

　　(2)高端定語(yǔ)從句：及物動(dòng)詞/介詞 +the extent to which+句子

　　eg.The government must consider the extent to which environmental problems can be resolved.

　　(3)主語(yǔ)從句：That+句子+makes it+adj+(for sb )to do sth /句子

　　eg.That the government invests more in arts,like music and painting makes it possible that the cities and town will become a more attractive place to live in.

　　(4)非謂語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)：Given +名詞/ Given that+句子

　　eg.Given that most young couples are too occupied to cinsider having babies,it is therefore imperative that they put off their parenthood.

　　2.倒裝，強(qiáng)調(diào)或者虛擬

　　(1)倒裝：Only...can.../Not only...but also.../Be it...or(不管是...還是...)

　　(2)強(qiáng)調(diào)：It is...that.../It is...who(正是......導(dǎo)致了......)

　　(3)虛擬：If...were...,...would...(注意在虛擬語(yǔ)氣中，this和that后都要用were而不是was)

　　3.長(zhǎng)句加短語(yǔ)的結(jié)合

　　例如在句子后面加入限定成分especially in citits/coutries/modern society, both in cities and on motorways, in this respect,ect.

　　eg.A person needs to fell that they are doing valued and valuable work,so positive feedback from superiors is very important in this respect.

　　4.用連詞進(jìn)行擴(kuò)展

　　例如用such as,for example,instead of,as well as 等等

　　eg.Being a celebrity—such as a famous film star or sports personality—brings problems as well asbenifit.

　　※in terms of(在......方面),for the sake of(為了改善......) ,regardless of(不管......) 其實(shí)也是復(fù)雜句的三大絕活。

　　例如：

　　(1)This children are often spoilt,not in terms of love and attention because working parents do not have time for this.

　　(2)......for the sake of their healty

　　(3) regardless of price