雅思寫(xiě)作語(yǔ)料庫(kù):如何改造罪犯
Sending criminals to prison is not the effective method to deal with them. Education and job training should be used instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 將犯罪分子送進(jìn)監(jiān)獄不是有效的方式解決犯罪，我們應(yīng)該給他們提供接受教育和工作培訓(xùn)的機(jī)會(huì)，是否認(rèn)同?
相關(guān)題目：
Research suggests that majority of criminals who send to prison would commit crimes when set free, what do you think of this case? What can be done to solve this problem?持續(xù)犯罪的原因以及解決途徑?
作家立場(chǎng)：針對(duì)不同的犯罪分子，采取不同的改造策略。
布局圖：
首段：背景介紹 + 原題觀點(diǎn) + 作家立場(chǎng)
二段：讓步原題觀點(diǎn)的合理性
三段：反駁原題觀點(diǎn)的不合理
尾段：再次亮明觀點(diǎn)+ 總結(jié)理由
思路拓展：
1. 犯罪的形態(tài)不同，對(duì)于重刑犯或者屢教不改者，犯罪已是一種習(xí)慣，是報(bào)復(fù)他們認(rèn)為不公的社會(huì)。因此，種罪重罰，延長(zhǎng)刑期更加有效合理，因?yàn)檫@體現(xiàn)了法律的公正，對(duì)于受害者以及家屬是一種精神安慰，更重要的是，這對(duì)于潛在的犯罪分子有威懾作用。
2. 對(duì)于一些少年犯罪者，過(guò)失犯罪者，沖動(dòng)犯罪者，教育是有效的，教育幫助他們反思人生，明辨是非，增強(qiáng)守法意識(shí)，因此，刑期結(jié)束后，受過(guò)良好教育者更加容易融入社會(huì)，開(kāi)啟新的人生。
3. 對(duì)于一些服刑者來(lái)說(shuō)，出獄后由于有入獄的經(jīng)歷受到社會(huì)和朋友的歧視，同時(shí)，找不到謀生的工作，想要開(kāi)始新生活，心有余力不足，這種情況下，工作技能培訓(xùn)是可取的。
語(yǔ)料庫(kù)：(包含少年犯罪、累計(jì)犯罪、傳媒審查)
1. criminals = offenders = perpetrators 犯罪分子
2. teenage criminals = young offenders = juvenile law-breakers 少年犯
3. youth crime = teenage crime = juvenile delinquency 少年犯罪
4. domestic violence and parental neglect 家庭暴力和父母的疏于管理
5. sex and violence = pornography and violence 色情和暴力
6. corrupt one’s pure mind 毒害純凈心靈
7. stimulate one’s sadistic impulse誘發(fā)暴力沖動(dòng)
8. misguide one’s life attitude 誤導(dǎo)人生觀
9. released prisoners = those who are set free from the prison 刑滿(mǎn)釋放人員
10. conduct some anti-social offences 做出反社會(huì)的行為
點(diǎn)評(píng)：亮點(diǎn)表達(dá)，推薦使用
11. embark on the criminal road 走上犯罪道路
12. turn to a life of crime開(kāi)始罪惡的人生
13. habitual criminals = hardened criminals 慣犯
14. felons 重刑犯
15. gangster boss or terrorist 黑幫大哥或者恐怖分子
16. recidivism 累計(jì)犯罪
17. repetitive criminalities = continuous crimes 累計(jì)犯罪
18. reform malefactors = reclaim law-breakers 改造犯罪分子
19. It is notoriously hard for released prisoners to earn a decent living, especially when they lack the basic working skills or survival abilities 對(duì)于刑滿(mǎn)釋放人員來(lái)說(shuō)，體面謀生尤其艱難，特別是當(dāng)他們?nèi)狈竟ぷ骷寄芗吧婺芰Φ臅r(shí)候。
20. As for some juvenile criminals or those who are led astray, they, in most cases, have few chances of receiving fine education and thus own poor law-abiding consciousness. 對(duì)于一些少年犯或者過(guò)失犯罪者，他們大多情況下沒(méi)有機(jī)會(huì)接受良好教育，因此缺乏守法意識(shí)。
21. …… endanger the stability of the society and afflict numerous sufferers 破壞社會(huì)的穩(wěn)定以及折磨許多的受害者
點(diǎn)評(píng)：寫(xiě)作犯罪或者慣性犯罪的影響
22. the hardship of making a living 謀生的艱難
23. take revenge on the community which they think unfair 報(bào)復(fù)他們認(rèn)為不公平的社會(huì)
24. has a deterrent role to play in…… 可以在……方面發(fā)揮威懾作用
拓展：deter sb from doing sth = stop sb from doing sth 阻止某人做……
25. provide sb with custom-tailored ways of reclamation 應(yīng)該提供量體裁衣(因人而異)的改造方式。
語(yǔ)料庫(kù)：
1. The rate of various criminalities，in some counties, keeps on increasing in recent decades, which not only afflicts the sufferers but also jeopardizes the security of the society 近年來(lái)，各種犯罪率居高不下，不僅給受害者帶來(lái)痛苦，也威脅到社會(huì)的穩(wěn)定。
2. some people tend to believe that = an argument hold by some people is that …… 有人認(rèn)為 ……
3. however，my stand is that …… 然而，我的立場(chǎng)是 ……
4. primary = for a start = first 第一
5. also = further = another reason to be considered is that …… 第二
6. last = eventually = to make the final point 第三
7. in other words = more precisely = by that I mean 換言之
8. granted，I confess that = indeed, I have to concede that 的確，我承認(rèn)……
9. Nonetheless, it is rather superficial to simply believe that …… 然而，簡(jiǎn)單認(rèn)為……相當(dāng)膚淺
10. In the final analysis, I re-affirm my conviction that ……最后，我重申我的立場(chǎng) ……
