如何用吸引人的作文開頭獲取雅思寫作的高分
再來(lái)說我們的寫作，我們的寫作中有兩項(xiàng)是類似于帥哥辣妹，那就是LR和GRA即用詞和語(yǔ)法多變，這是一目了然的內(nèi)容，是不是有很好的多樣的用詞或者多樣的句式，直接給讀者以震撼，那就是說我們?cè)趯懽髦锌梢杂眠@種方式來(lái)烘托出你自己。然而，事實(shí)是，不是每個(gè)人都是帥哥辣妹，就是說不是每個(gè)人都有很華麗的辭藻，多變純熟的句式，所以我們的雅思寫作也就需要我們從內(nèi)涵上來(lái)提升自己。那就是對(duì)應(yīng)了評(píng)分的TR和CC即邏輯個(gè)連貫。
在回歸我們的第一段，那么我們?cè)趺床拍軌蜃屛覀兊拈_門就能紅，讓考官耳目一新呢，可以通過以上兩種方式，也就是要么用詞語(yǔ)法，要么有內(nèi)涵的思維邏輯。有些培訓(xùn)機(jī)構(gòu)的老師管這叫扯淡，或者說是無(wú)稽之談，很多學(xué)員也覺得第一段嘛，無(wú)所謂，稍加介紹就可以了嘛，但是我想說，有些老師說可以，他們有能力在后面的主題段中很好的展示自己的英文功底，但是不是每位考生都有這個(gè)勝算的，所以首段還是用點(diǎn)小伎倆吧。我們管老師的這種無(wú)所謂的靠頭叫“姜太公釣魚，愿者上鉤”絕對(duì)自信型，因?yàn)樗麄兪抢蠋?，那我們屌絲學(xué)員如何應(yīng)對(duì)呢?
我們可以用一些邏輯比如說，追根溯源，對(duì)比，細(xì)節(jié)特征，敘事性開頭，以此來(lái)秀出我們自己的想法，然后再引出觀點(diǎn)，給出自我的認(rèn)知。
逐個(gè)加以解釋，追根溯源，就是分析一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)出現(xiàn)的原因，其實(shí)我們很多的寫作話題都是社會(huì)現(xiàn)象，必然有它的一個(gè)背景性的原因在里面，那我們就可以分析了，舉個(gè)例子來(lái)說明問題，題目Foreigntourists should be charged more than local people when they visit cultural andhistorical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with thisopinion?
如何追根來(lái)引出話題呢，我們給出一個(gè)示范The continuing boom of the international tourism whichis to a large extent derived from the advancement of long-distance air travelhas made it more available for people to travel further, however the up surge ofthe tourists is blamed for damaging of the historical sites, thus many reach theconsensus that the foreign tourist should be charged more as one way toconstrain the deteriorating of historical attractions. for my part, however, itis too rash to make such a decision concerning the following.
是不是引出來(lái)了呢，同時(shí)我們也秀出了自己不是。
另外從對(duì)比上分析，分為時(shí)間性對(duì)比和地域性對(duì)比，那么就我們這個(gè)題目來(lái)講，我們同樣可以用時(shí)間性對(duì)比，例，Gone are the days whenpeople travel on horseback for several to a tourist destination; we,contemporarily, can get to every corner within several hours by the highefficient flight, which give a great push to the boom of international tourismwhich is considered to contribute to the damage of the local historical sites.Therefore some advocate the high charge on the foreigners, which, from my part,is a rash decision. 時(shí)間性對(duì)比就出來(lái)了。
另外就是細(xì)節(jié)特征描述，也是很好的一個(gè)方法，比較難，但是比較能夠挑戰(zhàn)高分個(gè)自我，還是這個(gè)題目，我們給出它的細(xì)節(jié)描述，The wonder anddesire of the historical sites such as the great pyramids in Egypt, the warriorterra cotta in china and the garden in the heaven in Babylon attracts explorersall over the world to visit, which is blamed for the damage of the sites, thussome consider the higher charge on the foreigner so as to protect the touristdestinations. While for me, I consider it as a rash decision to make.
當(dāng)然還有就是敘事性開頭了，可以是新聞故事的描述，可以是某個(gè)現(xiàn)象的陳述，同一題目，再來(lái)看一例子，when you are wandering inthe street, particularly in the historical cities, you would be astonished to beencountered with so many foreigners surrounding you, which is thought to bebrought by the continuing international tourism. Whereas, this may to someextent lead to cultural invasion as well as architectural vandalism, leading tothe view of higher charge on the foreigners. While I think this is far frombeing a root conclusion.
縱觀以上幾個(gè)開頭，似乎有點(diǎn)長(zhǎng)了，但是我們是照顧到句式的處理。有一個(gè)值得一提的是我們不在使用所謂的模版套句，套用模版是在當(dāng)下雅思寫作考試當(dāng)中的大忌，所以我們可以用我們獨(dú)一無(wú)二的思維邏輯，也就是我們的氣質(zhì)美告訴考官我們跟別人不一樣，以這樣的方式開頭，正在為寫作犯愁的烤鴨們，我想結(jié)果會(huì)讓你們大吃一驚的。不妨試試吧!
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