雅思大作文常見(jiàn)論點(diǎn)總結(jié)

考生們都知道雅思考官在評(píng)判一篇大作文時(shí)，除了看文章的結(jié)構(gòu)和語(yǔ)言之外，還很重視這篇文章的主體內(nèi)容。而中國(guó)考生在寫(xiě)essay時(shí)常見(jiàn)的一個(gè)問(wèn)題恰恰是考前準(zhǔn)備了語(yǔ)言，臨場(chǎng)讀懂了題目，很快形成了觀(guān)點(diǎn)，但是卻不知該從哪些角度來(lái)支持自己的thesis statement。所以主體段落觀(guān)點(diǎn)單調(diào)，思維陳舊，內(nèi)容空洞，為達(dá)到字?jǐn)?shù)而把一個(gè)觀(guān)點(diǎn)寫(xiě)了再寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題常常會(huì)充斥在文章的body part。這極大地影響了考生的作文成績(jī)。在此，筆者將多年積累的雅思大作文常見(jiàn)論點(diǎn)總結(jié)為一首打油詩(shī)，以饗讀者。

論文觀(guān)點(diǎn)角度多;

科技經(jīng)濟(jì)常切磋;

肉體靈魂不放過(guò);

權(quán)利平等要把握;

個(gè)人國(guó)家多權(quán)衡;

文化道德思路擴(kuò);

結(jié)合話(huà)題多思索;

主體論證不難說(shuō)。

一、科技和經(jīng)濟(jì)

在雅思論文主體部分寫(xiě)作中，科技角度是使用頻率最高的角度。絕大多數(shù)作文的話(huà)題都可以從科技發(fā)展對(duì)人的生活帶來(lái)的影響這個(gè)角度來(lái)加以分析。例如：

討論是否將動(dòng)物用于科學(xué)實(shí)驗(yàn)：

Some scientists claim that experiments carried out on animals would be crucial for potential breakthroughs in treating some of the most-feared incurable diseases.

討論社會(huì)道德下滑：

Development of science and technology has given birth to materialism and capitalism which favor the research for economic growth and freedom of men. Consequently, no spiritual, moral, and traditional values are taken into account.

壓力大的原因：

The rapid development of science and technology makes work today more demanding than it used to be.

親情淡漠的原因：

The availability of a great variety of high-tech recreational facilities also diverts people from enjoying chats with the members of their families.

環(huán)保全球化的原因：

Developing countries lack sufficient numbers of qualified scientists and other skilled personnel to cope with the increasingly serious environmental problems, such as the ozone depletion, the marine pollution and the like.

如果說(shuō)科技的發(fā)展是人類(lèi)社會(huì)進(jìn)步的助推器，那么經(jīng)濟(jì)的影響就是社會(huì)前進(jìn)的方向標(biāo)。經(jīng)濟(jì)的強(qiáng)弱通常會(huì)導(dǎo)致某一現(xiàn)象的出現(xiàn)或某種結(jié)果的產(chǎn)生。比如在討論什么是最偉大的發(fā)明時(shí)，考生可能想到電話(huà)。那么怎樣來(lái)支持這一觀(guān)點(diǎn)呢?試看下面的句子：

The development of the telephone created a new market for the employment of women. The position of telephone operators was most often filled by women, creating a new world of opportunities for females to struggle for the equal rights to males.

通過(guò)說(shuō)明電話(huà)的發(fā)明使女性獲得工作更多的工作機(jī)會(huì)，從而在經(jīng)濟(jì)是更加獨(dú)力，這對(duì)于她們爭(zhēng)取平等的權(quán)利起到了巨大的推動(dòng)作用。