話題八：校園生活與活動 Writing 8 高考英語高分范文1

Writing 8 ?。凵虾Ｊ懈呷⒄Z二模（虹口區(qū)） ］請你以高三學生李華的署名給校長發(fā)一封電子郵件，感謝學校三年來對你的培養(yǎng)和教育，并向?qū)W校提出如下建議：學校教學應(yīng)該注重學生學習方法的培養(yǎng)；學校應(yīng)該豐富學生的校園生活。

高分范文1

Dear Headmaster，

I'm Li Hua from Senior 3．Since graduation is around the corner，I'm writing to you to show my gratitude as well as put forward some suggestions．

Thank you for providing us with a garden-like campus．Thank you for providing us with advanced study facilities and a prefect atmosphere of obtaining knowledge and developing both academic and social abilities．Most importantly，thank you for providing us with those capable and excellent teachers who guided us to be mature in our growth．The words of gratitude are endless to be told．

So，I really hope my school can become better and that's why this e-mail is sent．Firstly，the school teaching should pay attention to the cultivation of students' study methods．Undoubtedly，everyone in this school has excellent intellect，so proper and effective study methods really make a difference and students are sure to achieve more．Moreover，the school should enrich students' campus life．Although the school is always encouraging us to do some out-of-class activities，we often meet with many obstacles in case of the conflict between school work and after-class activities．I expect that our school will offer us more freedom and help instead of restrictions．

Dear headmaster，I will appreciate it if you can accept my suggestions．May our school be excellent forever！

Yours，

Li Hua