話題四：情感世界 Writing 4 高考英語高分范文2

Writing 4 　你是Mary，得知你的朋友張華因覺得自己長得不夠好看而感到自卑，想在暑假里接受整容手術(shù)。請你寫一封信勸說張華。

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Dear Zhang Hua，

I've heard that you have made up your mind to have a cosmetic surgery this summer owing to your dissatisfaction with your appearance．Learning about your situation，I'm sorry and upset to find out your feeling of being inferior to others．

Please don't be！As far as I'm concerned，you have better choices other than the current one．The reasons and means can be listed as follows．To begin with，the safety of cosmetic surgery itself is of great doubt．Hundreds of people died on the way to pursuing beauty just because they've chosen a wrong way，thus saying goodbye to the possibilities and surprise of their future life．Besides，as the technology of this industry is far from mature，no one knows for sure about the consequences．Please don't put your precious life at risk！If you're indeed worried about your appearance，why not try to beautify your figure or turn to make-up？It'll make a difference．Furthermore，as a saying goes，“Never judge a book by its cover．” Inner beauty weighs a lot more than your appearance．Gain wisdom by reading good books；cultivate a pleasant personality；enrich your life by picking up a meaningful hobby．With wisdom，a good personality and richness in your heart，you will witness a new you—confident，happy and more beautiful．

Cosmetic surgery does more harm than good．I sincerely hope you can follow my advice and become beautiful in another way．

Yours，

Mary