Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay about the quality that you consider most important for a college student . You should state the reasons and write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
審題立意
1. 導(dǎo)語(yǔ)解讀：要求考生根據(jù)導(dǎo)語(yǔ)的提示，闡述自己對(duì)于“大學(xué)生最重要的品質(zhì)”的看法。
2. 文章立意：什么品質(zhì)對(duì)大學(xué)生來(lái)說(shuō)最重要？有人認(rèn)為，誠(chéng)實(shí)最重要；還有人認(rèn)為，善良比較重要。那么，你認(rèn)為對(duì)大學(xué)生來(lái)說(shuō)，最重要的品質(zhì)是什么？
寫(xiě)作思路
1. 第一段直接提出自己的觀點(diǎn)。
2. 第二段承接上文，呼應(yīng)自己的觀點(diǎn)，并通過(guò)舉例來(lái)證明自己的觀點(diǎn)，說(shuō)明毅力的重要性。
3. 第三段呼應(yīng)上文觀點(diǎn)，并進(jìn)行引申，強(qiáng)調(diào)“毅力”是大學(xué)生需要培養(yǎng)的必備素質(zhì)。
參考范文
What is the most important quality for college students? In my opinion, what college students need most is perseverance. 1
Perseverance refers to the deter-mination to fulfill certain aims despite difficulties. It is an indispensable part of a man’s character. 2 A saying goes that success lies in perseverance. 3 If we want to complete heavy school work, perseverance is a necessity. Without perseverance, it is hard to overcome difficulties. The inventor of the electric bulb, one of the most famous scientists in the world, Thomas Edison, is a good case in point. Before the bulb came into being, he had failed thousands of times. With perseverance, he finally lit the whole world. 4
In a word, perseverance plays a vital role in a successful life. The same is true of every other aspect of our life, such as friendship, love, and career. 5 So, I deem that perseverance is the most important quality for college students, and they have no reason to ignore the cultivation of perseverance. 6
對(duì)大學(xué)生來(lái)說(shuō)，什么品質(zhì)是最重要的？我個(gè)人認(rèn)為，大學(xué)生最需要的是毅力。
毅力是指克服困難來(lái)完成某些目標(biāo)的決心，是人的性格中不可或缺的一部分。人們常說(shuō)，成功源于堅(jiān)持不懈。如果我們想完成繁重的學(xué)業(yè)，毅力必不可少。沒(méi)有毅力，很難克服眾多困難。電燈泡的發(fā)明者，世界上最著名的科學(xué)家之一托馬斯?愛(ài)迪生就是一個(gè)很好的例子。在發(fā)明電燈泡之前他經(jīng)歷過(guò)成千上萬(wàn)次失敗。憑著毅力，他最終點(diǎn)亮了整個(gè)世界。
總而言之，毅力對(duì)于成功的人生來(lái)說(shuō)，起著至關(guān)重要的作用。同樣的道理也適用于我們生活中的其他各個(gè)方面，比如，友誼、愛(ài)情以及職業(yè)。因此，我認(rèn)為對(duì)大學(xué)生來(lái)說(shuō)，毅力是最重要的品質(zhì)，大學(xué)生們毫無(wú)理由去忽略毅力的培養(yǎng)。
范文點(diǎn)評(píng)
1. 以自問(wèn)自答的方式點(diǎn)出文章主題。
2. 呼應(yīng)首段，引出毅力的概念和重要性。
3. 通過(guò)引述俗語(yǔ)來(lái)支持自己的觀點(diǎn)。
4. 通過(guò)愛(ài)迪生發(fā)明電燈泡的例證，進(jìn)一步支持自己的觀點(diǎn)。
5. 總結(jié)觀點(diǎn)，并進(jìn)行引申。
6. 重申觀點(diǎn)，加以強(qiáng)調(diào)。
要點(diǎn)用法
perseverance n. 堅(jiān)持不懈，毅力
determination n. 決心
indispensable adj. 不可缺少的
necessity n. 必需品
overcome v. 克服，勝過(guò)
electric bulb 電燈泡
句法點(diǎn)評(píng)
1. In my opinion, what college students need most is perseverance.
本句包含一個(gè)what引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句，即what college students need most，該主語(yǔ)從句在整個(gè)句子中充當(dāng)主語(yǔ)。
2. If we want to complete heavy school work, perseverance is a necessity.
本句中if 引導(dǎo)條件狀語(yǔ)從句。
