Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark “Experience without learning is better than learning without experience .” You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to make yourself more experienced . You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
審題立意
1. 導(dǎo)語(yǔ)解讀：要求考生根據(jù)給定的話語(yǔ)就“經(jīng)驗(yàn)和學(xué)習(xí)的關(guān)系”這一話題展開(kāi)論述，闡明經(jīng)驗(yàn)的重要性。
2. 文章立意：經(jīng)驗(yàn)從學(xué)習(xí)中得來(lái)，但沒(méi)有經(jīng)驗(yàn)的學(xué)習(xí)只是一紙空文，沒(méi)什么意義。因此，經(jīng)驗(yàn)很重要。
寫(xiě)作思路
1. 第一段簡(jiǎn)要解釋給定話語(yǔ)的含義，然后提出論點(diǎn)：經(jīng)驗(yàn)很重要。
2. 第二段通過(guò)成功人士的做法說(shuō)明經(jīng)驗(yàn)的重要性，同時(shí)提出如何使自己更具有經(jīng)驗(yàn)。
3. 第三段以大學(xué)生為例論述使自己經(jīng)驗(yàn)豐富的方法。
參考范文
“Experience without learning is better than learning without experience.” The saying means that experience is of vital importance and one can have only learning with no experience. It stresses the importance of experience. 1
I totally agree with that. 2 Successful people are willing to learn from their experience immediately. They know that failure is the mother of success. Whenever they fail, after introspecting for a while, they can learn a lot from their experience. Doing this, they can know the mistakes and make some changes. Then they will start again and continue struggling for success. They do know the importance of experience. So what can you do to make yourself more experienced? 3
For my part, it is worthwhile for senior university students to spend some time acquiring experience in vocational and volunteer activities, which will provide us with the necessary workplace skills and experience, boost our appeal in the eyes of employers because the activities can build our strength of character and reveal an innate desire to work. There’s no doubt that we’ll be afforded a unique edge over the majority of our contemporaries. 4
“有經(jīng)驗(yàn)而無(wú)學(xué)問(wèn)勝于有學(xué)問(wèn)而無(wú)經(jīng)驗(yàn)?！边@句話的意思是，經(jīng)驗(yàn)是至關(guān)重要的，如果不實(shí)踐，人只能空有知識(shí)。它強(qiáng)調(diào)了經(jīng)驗(yàn)的重要性。
我完全同意這種看法。成功人士愿意及時(shí)吸取經(jīng)驗(yàn)。他們懂得失敗乃成功之母。每當(dāng)他們失敗時(shí)，短時(shí)間反省之后，他們都能從失敗的經(jīng)驗(yàn)中汲取很多教訓(xùn)。這樣，他們就能了解自己的錯(cuò)誤并做出一些改變，然后重振旗鼓，繼續(xù)為成功而斗爭(zhēng)。他們的確懂得經(jīng)驗(yàn)的重要性，那么做些什么才能豐富你的經(jīng)驗(yàn)?zāi)兀?/p>
對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)，大學(xué)的高年級(jí)學(xué)生花費(fèi)一些時(shí)間從求職和志愿者活動(dòng)中獲取經(jīng)驗(yàn)是值得的，這會(huì)為我們提供必要的職場(chǎng)技能與經(jīng)驗(yàn)，提升我們?cè)诠椭餮壑械奈?，因?yàn)檫@些活動(dòng)能塑造我們堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的品格并展示一種內(nèi)在的工作欲望。毋庸置疑，我們會(huì)超越大多數(shù)同齡人而獲得一種獨(dú)特的優(yōu)勢(shì)。
范文點(diǎn)評(píng)
1. 開(kāi)篇簡(jiǎn)要解釋給定話語(yǔ)的含義，同時(shí)結(jié)合話語(yǔ)含義給出其要說(shuō)明的觀點(diǎn)：經(jīng)驗(yàn)的重要性。
2. 第二段首句明確表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)：贊同經(jīng)驗(yàn)很重要。
3. 以成功人士的經(jīng)驗(yàn)為例，論述經(jīng)驗(yàn)的重要性。
4. 以大學(xué)生為例，論述如何讓自己經(jīng)驗(yàn)豐富，并提供切實(shí)可行的做法。
要點(diǎn)用法
be willing to do 樂(lè)意做
introspect v. 反省，內(nèi)省
worthwhile adj. 值得的
vocational adj. 職業(yè)的
workplace n. 工作場(chǎng)所
boost v. 促進(jìn)；增加
appeal n. 吸引力；感染力
innate adj. 內(nèi)在的；固有的；先天的
unique edge 獨(dú)特的優(yōu)勢(shì)
contemporary n. 同時(shí)代的人
句法點(diǎn)評(píng)
1. They do know the importance of experience.
此句中用了“do+動(dòng)詞原形”表示強(qiáng)調(diào)的結(jié)構(gòu)，增加了句式的多樣性。
2. For my part, it is worthwhile for senior university students to spend some time acquiring experience in vocational and volunteer activities, which will provide us with the necessary workplace skills and experience, boost our appeal in the eyes of employers because the activities can build our strength of character and reveal an innate desire to work.
